I’ve seen that scream before….great little write.🙏

Hoi hoi
A very nice and elegant work of art you’ve made here.
Like it a lot, but two thumbs is not possible.
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi
Love your poem.
Did you draw this one yourself? In one go, without lifting your pen?
That impresses me very much!
Kind regards, Gus

Superb work.

Beautifully penned, Green. Into the book it belongs! This one pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Amazing write. Appreciate you.

Damian

A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)

When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it

I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.

The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
I hope that there is success from your dilemma soon!

An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.

I digs this

Much respect

Naaj

Superb work.