First, I love the Esthetics of this piece. You really make the reader focus. The first line was on point. I enjoyed this.

Movement is EVERYTHING. And you certainly hit your stride in this piece. Too often seem to wanna wait on a “sign” before they’ll get off their asses & do something. If the thought whispers in the mind…move on it. That’s why it’s there.

Truth runs through everything – or should for Life’s sake! The ‘do unto others as..’ in any faith is the truth of existance, without it – all’s lost. Perhaps that explains the reason for our planet gradually fading into space even unreachable via Man’s ability. Maybe Al will win the contest – when it’s truthful enough to say how and – able. Fine writing, also a fine claim to fame by, perhaps, starting a debate

Love the flow and the T.R.U.T.H. in this. Must have missed seeing this one on the board when I was here the last few times. But that’s just like the truth….you have to go looking for it. Magickal as they are, we can’t depend or even subsist on thought & word alone. Actions…passions…are what makes it an earthly reality. It’s like the old truther meme says…”the world is not real yet everything you do matters”

Keeping this one.

Big thx, lady. I always appreciate your depth of insight.
And I’m also enjoy hearing about your shower escapades 🙂

Nope. Haven’t tried. Life has a way of derailing me. Thanks. I try to vary how I write and what I write about.

I love your writing style. I could not help but laugh at some parts and nod my head in agreement at other parts. Nicely done.

hello lovely poetess this is beautifully uplifting 💕

Inspirational. It reminded me a bit of Debby Boone’s You Light Up My Life. Whether it’s the fire in your soul or a person who lights up your existence – and yes, an awesome day that is so beautiful that it bears acknowledgement…you captured it!

Sad but sweetly done

As many times as I’ve seen breathtaking sunsets like this, I never fail to be amazed. Your lovely words do the scene justice.

hello beautiful poetess I feel this very deeply 💕

I shed a tear on this one. My son moved to the state of Washington and left behind most of his things. I HAVE DONE THIS! He hopes to visit at Christmas. I haven’t told him about my cancer treatments or surgery. I see the doctor again in less than a month and I’m hoping for good news. Either way, I tell him where I stand. I finished chemo in July. The waiting is horrid. I was so into what I could to and doing it that months flew up. Painful and fearful days also slept away. Now the time us moving too slowly. I have blood work next week and then…the office visit. I really loved this piece.

Scent of yesterday sometimes is everything to let us hold on for better or worse ….

BIG LIKE

this is exactly how I felt yesterday the future is so uncertain for me sometimes I want to leave the world of choices great write 💕

Had that feeling as well recently. Nicely written