PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)

Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Welcome to Dystopia.

Poetry

April 22, 2025

4

Oh that we could live in peace no lies,no greed,no one to fleece.Accepting of each others livesbut told to carry guns and knives.Our leaders stoke our primal fears,they strut and sneer to gain more cheers.And all the time the rich...

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3 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thanks for your reply…..the real problem with AI is it diminishes our ability to think but perhaps that’s not a bad thing.
- M.E
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Mind-opening and thought-provoking poem. Well done, Peter!
  - Backdeckbenny (Peter)
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks M.E…..everything I said is true but it’s not worth me getting angry about it.Doing so only gives the nasties a reason to gloat or worse, hunt me down.
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

deeper

Poetry

April 22, 2025

10

Disastrous thoughts collide within meto face it head-on or bury ita thistle of thorns, my cloudMy happiness, taken by an awful feelingshrouded in gloom, it picksDreaded doom, it flowersIt's anxiety's trick and powerterrorizing my peace of mindThoughts of a...

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7 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Adagio 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  thank you most graciouisly lovely poetess 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  thank you beautiful Indie hugs 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such vivid imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

forget

Poetry

April 22, 2025

6

Darkness Bane, my hurt is insanecurled into a ball, I balkWith shivers of madness, I trembleSleek with regret, I stutterneedful cage of a somber toneReleasing these feelings, necessaryMy keenness can be felt deeplyIf you listen to the silent weepCloistered...

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4 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Adagio did you know god made certain vessels just to destroy as an example? vessels wrought for destruction I wonder if I am one of those 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  thank you dearest Adagio 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Brenda. Such a powerful read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Cut The Shit

Poetry

April 22, 2025

22

When I tell you that my mouth is recklessDon’t always assume it is for pleasant thingsThere are times when my mouth and my thoughtsAre on a volatile level.When they created the abbreviation F.A.F.OThey had to have me in mindDon’t...

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18 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  hello lovely Fia it’s evident you are fierce lady 💕
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Brenda. ;))
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Fia….who made you so angry….it’s kinda powerful sexy too btw.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Peter
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Superb work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Mic Drop. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian
- Sam Nash
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  You told me… but I never listen… holy crap
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Hmmmm (arms crossed)
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you, Adira
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you, Hxx
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I am ok, thank you Dragon-Fire
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Someone did. I’m good Thank you Adagio
- Malaya
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Isn’t it strange that someone will say your mouth is reckless yet still choose to open up that can of worms. Once they do and we respond they don’t know how to act. It’s like, nah, this is what you wanted right, now you got it.. I feel every word of this.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Malaya
- FlatDaddy
  10 months ago
  
  Oh, maybe this WAS for me! Ha, ha, ha! Brilliant, Fia, just brilliant. Now you HAVE to feel better! 🙂
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months ago
    
    Haha not meant for you. lol
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Fret

Poetry

April 22, 2025

10

Darkness dread, my fear is fedIn the gothic gloom, squanderFeelings take a tollexpending them freelyleaves one with a dull acheemptiness ensues with fretful thoughtsI'm not liked of this, I'm surespurned affections answer for meLittle lady, so bareCover your nakednessa...

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8 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I can relate to this. Emptiness ensues fretful thoughts. So true.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    thank you lovely Fia it’s just one of those high anxiety days you know?
    - Fia Naturie
      1 year, 3 months ago
      
      Understood
      
      Crimsin
      1 year, 3 months ago
      
      it will be okay 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Adagio 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  thank you graciously beautiful poetess 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Brenda. A powerful read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you 💕
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