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Read More1.So now, you seek a primer—after years of painting—Without enough sanding,Drowning in the paradox of colors.2.There is enough paint in here (my heart) to fill that emptiness.I opened it like Pandora’s box.3.Armed to the teeth with brushes and rollers,Stripped...
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Thank you, Damian! Appreciated! “)
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Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
It is not about painting, I agree. nice work-
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External inspiration, internal conversation. 50/50 hehehe. I was painting a wall at home and using the process to write.
Thank you Fia! “)
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Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.
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Thank you brother! I appreciate it! “)
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Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3
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This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.
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Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
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Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)
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This is deeply, thought-provoking.
I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.
It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.
Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x
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Read MoreWhat am I a chocolate teapot?An empty sentence without a dot?I melt when you say “hi”And bleed after a final goodbye.I never imagined you would leaveNot caring when my heart you deceive. I didn’t expect I was so useless. I didn’t...
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Read MoreThe Earth has always had a planShe shifts continents like furniturestirs storms in her sleepstarts over when she feels like itShe doesn’t need permissionShe doesn’t need usNo, we didn’t cause all thisThe Earth has her own cyclesher own rhythmShe...
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Powerfully penned, Zazzles. Reminds me of an old George Carlin bit, when it comes to shaking us off like a bad case of fleas. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sorry it took so long to reply back to you Damian. Yeah I remember that skit from George Colin. He was one of the greatest.
Thank you for visiting my friend
Jackie xo
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Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian