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Many thanks Jim.. wrote that whilst still asleep – probably shows! However being an admitted scribbler I go with the flow.
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Joy,
From what I know, this sounds like you, your life, your time, your place… all of it full of quiet beauty…
Vol
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Read Morethe sole tenant of a blues song black and white sheet music color coordinated notes on faces in shadows all of the streetlights the same color as the empty hearts walking the cobblestones at midnight after the bars have shut down much like they have when feelings find no songs to coordinate with the...
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Like a film noir movie this has the effects of heartbreak and loneliness with a touch of moral ambiguity. I can feel the barren parts of life all over it. Good one, J.
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Thank you for your kind comment, Tim.
j.
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I wholeheartedly agree with Tim. This does have a film noir ambiance to it. Were you by any chance wearing a trench coat and a low brimmed fedora while writing it? Lol, so good to have your presence here, J. Like you never missed a beat!
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Thank you, Kelly….I had the trench coat on but couldn’t find my fedora.
Thanks, it is good to be on this site….I have decided this is my choice now.So many of us from WC migrated here.
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Reminds me of all those movies about city angst. (I am suppressing a rant about how much I hate New York), and all it’s denizens… I can see them now walking down seedy sidewalks in the rain, their furthest horizon in easy walking distance. Beautiful imagery sir, and a nice reminder of how happy I am in a town with only about twelve occupied houses.
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Interesting what you said. I was from the Bronx, originally and by the time we left…I was so ready for a new place to live.
Guess I was NOT a city boy even though I was born there.
I appreciate this review. We lived in a five-story high rise on the fifth floor. NO elevator so it was a trek every time.Thanks again, just hope you don’t hate me…ha ha.
j.
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‘climbing the notes to where you are
so high in the atmosphere
and yes I know I’m sky scraping
but damn you are fine’fine writing.. seems you’v found why, where and how: the person has added ‘special’ to everything
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hello lovely Emma good morning thank you graciously for the love on this it’s appreciated❤
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Next to last stanza is so-well worded. This quite sensual but not blatant, which makes it poetry that is a pleasure to read.
I also really like the stanza that emmagreen pointed out.
You have a nice variety to your writing.
I clicked that I was mature enough to read this poem. Even though I am 75, I probably scammed on being mature enough.j.
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously I’m happy you liked this and at 55 I’m mature enough too lol❤
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![Profile picture of Daniel Long]()
Brenda, this is one of your best pieces… truly well spoken!
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel that is a great compliment❤
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I found myself spinning with the joy of fulfillment to be. Thanks dear Crimsin. (It’s not a sin ;))
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thank you graciously dearest Jim good afternoon❤
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It’s almost 7PM here, but ty dear!
I’m in Rhode Island
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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This was a great piece. So passionate, so hot! I’m glad I found it.
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thank you graciously dearest poet you made me smile ❤️
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Very much please indeed. Such fun to read your clever and lighthearted slice of the morning.
Happy me to have connected. Be well Emma 🙂