waves of feeling come over me
the music spins and I with it
entering a trance state
my body relaxes
and I feel that sexy feeling
an aphrodisiac for the mind
climbing the notes to where you are
so high in the atmosphere
and yes I know I'm sky scraping
but damn you are fine
titilating my imaginations
my body seeks your touch
my soul longs for your need
I'm becoming feverish with lust
it's insanity but I'm feeling you
touching your madness I back up for a minute
with trepidation I move forward
you pierce my stare with one of your own
it's a strange occurence my crave
coveting you in my nether regions
my vulnerability blushes
and I pulse with energy
my passion can bear no more
and I awaken from the crush
of your reality
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‘climbing the notes to where you are
so high in the atmosphere
and yes I know I’m sky scraping
but damn you are fine’
fine writing.. seems you’v found why, where and how: the person has added ‘special’ to everything
hello lovely Emma good morning thank you graciously for the love on this it’s appreciated❤
Next to last stanza is so-well worded. This quite sensual but not blatant, which makes it poetry that is a pleasure to read.
I also really like the stanza that emmagreen pointed out.
You have a nice variety to your writing.
I clicked that I was mature enough to read this poem. Even though I am 75, I probably scammed on being mature enough.
j.
hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously I’m happy you liked this and at 55 I’m mature enough too lol❤
Brenda, this is one of your best pieces… truly well spoken!
thank you graciously dearest Daniel that is a great compliment❤
I found myself spinning with the joy of fulfillment to be. Thanks dear Crimsin. (It’s not a sin ;))
thank you graciously dearest Jim good afternoon❤
It’s almost 7PM here, but ty dear!
I’m in Rhode Island
are you in Nova Scotia?
Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
This was a great piece. So passionate, so hot! I’m glad I found it.
thank you graciously dearest poet you made me smile ❤️