This is seriously lovely and not only took my breath away but replaced some of the cold of a very cold day with some much needed warmth .. Neville

This is very nice.

Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work. You bring this to life.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliant .. sums it up perfectly .. Neville

This is fantastic poetry writing my friend! Gritty, strong, like a shot of whiskey. Colorful, great story telling, and imagery. Great work.

John

Waw raw and I can see the imagery in this.

Goldenmyst said it accurately. I concur wholeheartedly.
But, thunderbird? My god, man. At the least Seagrams 7 !!! LOL
This is very good writing. A bullseye on a dartboard of a swanky bar life.
Awesome.

Outstanding and real. Nice work.

Thank you.

I love how you wove it all together into a cohesive story. There’s an underlying homage to the women and their fire and marks left on you that ties this all together so beautifully. I can’t help but think you made a difference in their existence as well. Fire water or no, this one is brilliant

Thank you. I appreciate you.

I love it, Brenda.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

wonderful work my dear crim. always aspiring.

Perfection is your middle name. Excellent. xox