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      Renege

      My dearMy love for you is getting weakerLike connecting to a distant Bluetooth speakerNo receiverSorry for the analogyBut to me our bond is like yesterday's technologySo my apologies This might be the last timeThis might be the last timeThis might...

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      • This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.

      • This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?

        • Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

          • Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.

      • Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!

        Curt

        • Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻

      • Superb work. Powerful.

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      legion

      fervently attempting to express myselfwith molatov cocktails metaphorsbuilding my ego, bringing down my soulmy voice rises like smoke and insanity comes out of medarkness talks and it looks like sunshinea warm dappled day lulling you into peacemy voices warn...

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      • The voice in our head, the legions that rule can take over if we’re not careful. I fight my own war when negative self-talk invades.

        • hello dearest Tim I am fortunate actually it took many miracles to get me to this age so many brushes with death…nature is beautiful to look at I guess I just have to remember my time will come no matter where I am and all I can do is do my best until then I am just feeling my mortality thank you my friend ❤️

      • Vivid and sharp. Fantastic work.

        • good morning dearest Thomas thank you graciously for the understanding and lovely comment ❤️

      • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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      Threshold of Realism and Surrealism

      Realism is a distant, flickering star. I know not what the tastes of reality are.   Some will share this glimmering sky with me, and to them, fortunate enough to see   a surrealist, star-blanketed day-sky.   I abide by the lonely confines of the only home...

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      Poetic Firestorm

      It is a firestorm that rages and whirls within my body, that no hand of sanity can smother.   My innards burn, my blood boils, the flesh upon me bubbles.   Sane, as I may have been before, the virtues that encased this body with innocence has long but...

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