Damn. How do I edit? It’s Undo the Darkness.

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Terrific imagery, and flow. A great read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Vivid… well done

This is a magnificent poem. Well done Thomas.

Wonderful Thomas. Your work is an example to all of us here! Bravo!

Thanks. I appreciate it.

Much appreciated.

Thanks, Adira

hello dearet Thomas I’ve had my share of war with him one particular night I anointed my whole house and yard with olive oil I felt so under attack it was relentless I feel for your struggle in this write and have been there great write 💕

Thank you, Brenda. I appreciate it.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Stellar imagery, and a fabulous read. I could picture the scene. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks, my friend.

What a poem. Damn! In your face. Love it!

I appreciate that. Thank you.

D minor is like most minor chords a wee bit sad.I like diminished chords which kind of fit between sadness and happiness.

Good write dude.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. Glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve always liked D minor, Neil Young wrote quite a few. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is something different from what I have been reading here. I like it.

hello dearest Damian that refrain about not knowing whose real and being an opening for the headliner really struck my I could feel the emotion there this is powerful 💕

Tremendous work, my friend.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I can hold my own, and am always exposing truth. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write. Thank you for the compliment. Really means a lot to me. I love your take my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Nothing wrong with opening, you played that’s what matters. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cool piece Damian. Love the D minor chord.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian

In a heartbeat…

Beautifully penned, Fia. Seductive read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautiful work.

Have to take leaps to get that loving devotion. Wonderful ink, friend.

What a lovely offer within the stanzas of this poem. Everlasting love. Romance poems are the best poems! Especially when there’s a sense of longing for someone who isn’t yours yet. Sweet write, Fia, as always.