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Read MoreI watch themwitness them on streetsbenchestrains their heads in the cloudsfloatingtheir eyes compelledto stare intocell phone screenssoaking up dopaminelike hummingbirdshovering above nectar they roam like cloudsfrom here to thereseemingly unawareof buildingsof traffic until they've slipped byout of sight replacedby other clouds
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Yes, Exactly. Thank you, J.
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Remember when just finding change for the pay phone was the goal to call someone. Now its like your always reachable. No one disconnects. Nice poem
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I remember those good old days well. lol Thanks you, Fia. 🙂
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Dig the nostalgic flavor of this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate all the comments, Damian. I’ll be by your way soon. 🙂
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Read MoreFueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see Face...
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Great!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is really good. Damian <3
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. Superb.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.
The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My pleasure entirely .. 👍
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Read MoreConstruction Zone pleased to meet you but I already forgot your name my heart has not forgotten you and the massive surgery done to its feelings a transplant has brought new love so, you may move on like a patient done with rehab I will remember your name...
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Powerfully penned. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for yur kind comment, Damian.
j.
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“I already forgotten your name. my heart has not forgotten you.” That is an Aww line. Nice
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thank you for the kind comment, Fia.
Encouraging site this is.
j.
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I don’t know but I do know how you’ve always managed to make me want to eat your words so I could digest a few and muchly increase my own writing!! I know: tis an impossibility. Unless a small bribe would help!
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I would take the bribe, em. But you don’t need to do that…your vocabulary tops mine any day…and when I read your poetry, I want to hide mine.
Thank you for the kind comment, nevertheless….ha, “nevertheless,” what an odd word.
j.
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Laughing because I’ve oft wondered about that word or – is it a perversion!
By the way, we’re not going to argue about who’s the best, sir.. I, a mere woman, wouldn’t dare! More than probably.. .. .. ..
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Nope we are NOT going to argue….I have stated my theory.
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Fantastic work. Great to see you here, my friend.
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Thanks Thomas.
j.
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Most on cell phones being anywhere else besides where they actually are.
j.