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Read MoreCoffee Shop Chanteuse sweet Bourbon necklacelaced in cappuccino embersof lost quiet moonshinedeep in pirate alley kisseswhen Luna rides her stallionhigh in the heat of summer skyover spired flames of starsthat burn in a rhapsodyof dark river chicorywhose smoke swirls in...
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Thanks so much my friend. This lady was singing old jazz songs at the coffee shop today. She was my muse.
John
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Hello John,
Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.
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Deep gratitude Visions. I thank you from my heart and soul. Love that you appreciated my evocation of atmosphere through details. Great thanks.
John
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Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Gracias Damian. Thank you so much for reading and your appreciation of both me and my poetry.
John
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Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.
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Thank you so much Light for your heartfelt reflections on my poem. Your impressions of my words here are deeply appreciated. Love your interpretation of the mood within my words. Indeed there is a depth of understanding in your thoughts and the feelings my poem inspired for you that really feels right. Deep gratitude.
John
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You are very welcome my friend🤍
Wishing You peaceful and happy times🕊️
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Tremendous work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you so very much Thomas. Glad you enjoyed this. Much appreciated.
John
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Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂
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Deep gratitude my friend. Very glad you enjoyed this offering of mine. Much appreciated. Indeed the chanteuse who inspired this poem was an exceptional inspiration. 🙂
John
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hello dearest Me this is beautifully dark and sad ❤️
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Hahaha, beware Lady
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I don’t know why this one makes me think of giving all for love. It’s beautiful in its darkness. But then again, too many don’t see the beauty of the dark
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Yes the darkness contains it all, but how do we see, Thanks Lady
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We really appreciate your support Lady, you’re to tight
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To take on the pain to protect what you hold precious. Beautiful write
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Don’t be so sure this is pt.1 of a dark series. Thank you Lady
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
GOODNESS, TFT!
Now, THAT is a proper Sonnet … it’s obvious you’ve done your homework.
Your creativity sparks, emotion sings, and diction dances. And, I like your use of elision. Could use a bit’a punctuation.
See critique and edits below:I said I don’t do THIS. POems that behave (STRESS-STRESS / a count long)
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V3L4 should be: What’s next, a ballad? Maybe, one or two.
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much appreciated. good luck convincin me to use punctuation 😉
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Now, Syr Bard
Post it so everyone can enjoy your amazing flexibility and creativity with a poet’s pen.
I’ll be first in line to review it for you! ⁓ Richard
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Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing