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Read MoreWhile she's away I just had a play Slipped into her brief(s) For a little relief. Hard as a rock With an average size cock
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They are nice panties aren’t they.?
Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I love everything about this. From the feelings like shadows, to confiding to the stars.
Beautiful expression on such a sad topic.
You are amazing:)-
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hello lovely Adelphina thank you for your love on this ❤️
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Simply beautiful….
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hello dearest Benny thank you graciously for the lovely comment ❤️
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hello beautiful thank you graciously for showing me love on this it’s deeply felt ❤️
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Yes, you have to love now and love them hard. That message is potent. You wrote this well.
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hello beautiful Fia yes that’s exactly it you have to love the people and animals you’re around with all of your heart thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. This one pulled at my heartstrings my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for feeling me so deeply ❤️
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Some are shaped by pain to early. Others, late lose the joy. The truth is in the moment, and loving those you’re with 🌼❤
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hello dearest Joe good morning thank you graciously for understanding yes that’s it ❤️
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I hope today’s a good day for you.my friend 🌼
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Read MoreYou are like smoking a cigaretteI am addicted to your kisses and hugsAt three am at the parkMeanwhile I touch your smooth skinAnd hear your beautiful voice.
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give up tobacco
for
more
touch
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I like it a lot. 🙂
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me too you
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🙂
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This is a peaceful piece with a tempting picture
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Beautiful work.
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Thank you Fia and Thomas for reading.
It was a quiet morning on the back deck. -
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Some people sit back and enjoy the scenery
Others want to memorize it and spread the word.
Thanks for sharing!
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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Powerful stuff Fia
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Thank you,Peter;))
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Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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