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Read More“I don't feel pain, I don't feel alive, yet no angels in the bright moonshine.” The lady of sorrow confided to herself aloud in a whisper. One so delicate, it could vanish like flying dust should she be loud. But she was standing stoically at...
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The opening lines set a fragile, haunting mood that carries through the poem beautifully.
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Passionately penned, Amethyste. Photographs and Memories as the old Jim Croce song goes. There was a change of temperature with this write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I appreciate your feedback.
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Amethyste wrote a new post
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Read MoreThis life is hardLots of stabsMiles to runBut yet let this soul singThe song of the heart
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Chère A.,
In this time of Christmas shit
You’ve to try extra hard
To hear the most beautiful
And real songs of the heartJust à l’improvise…
I wish you a lovely weekend.
Warm regards, Gus-
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I will try. Thank you.
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. I always dig your precise observations my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the support Damian.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhy am I drawn to your writing? I'm not sure myself. Is it because I can see the damage and every word Or is it that I can see you See, you get so engulfed in every word To make your point come across? It's...
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Passionately penned, Fia. Damn, the room got hot. This one is fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian <3
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Sizzling piece Fia. Well written and scorching hot. xo
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Thank you, Vision, Keeping it warm here. lol
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amazingly penned, a tantalizing, fiery read. that’s sensually engaging.
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Thank you so much Chantepleure appreciate that.
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Like this sexiness Lady, we agree that a great piece of writing can stir the loins. Tight work
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Thank you Me, love stirring the loins
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This feels raw and self-aware, especially in how it explores the act of reading as intimacy. There’s a lot of honesty here.
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Thank you, I tend to fall into the poems I read
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This is some sexy voyeurism you got going on here, Fia
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Thank you Naaj. It’s funny what the mind will conjure up as you read.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreAt Stars Rite, we want to make it clear that no member is removed from the site without due process. We believe in fairness, transparency, and maintaining a safe and respectful writing community. Below is an outline of our...
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Thanks for the information, Fia. Is that spam right above my comment? Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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It was
I got rid of it.
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Great info. Thanks Fia.
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Thank you Vision
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Good to know:).
Thanks for being transparent and letting us know what the process is.
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Pretty cool, Daniel. I like the visions that it creates easily for the reader. With an artistic flair of course.