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Read MoreHe had seen on TVAn execution by hangingCurious he was, he triedHow it is to hangExecution means dyingHanging is not a gameExecution means dyingHe won't do it againIt was just a funny gameThis caused his own death
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Thank you my friend.
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Yes, hanging is not a game at all. It is quite uncomfortable in fact. Interesting write.
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Very uncomfortable. Thanks for the read & comment Detritus.
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A thought provoking poem, dear Keith! The curiosity of young people is needed to explore and understand this world. But sometimes we underestimate the fact that children often don’t think about possible consequences of their actions, while they are engaged in making new experiences. Meaningful and important work, my friend!
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Oh so true Elke. Your words and feedback is always appreciated. xo
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Wham. You nailed it.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreAs the white doves fly to freedomMy soul is captured with youTo die of coldness and violenceWhy do I let it happen to me? I hate you for loving me; I hate you for obsessing me Controlling my thoughts by your...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciated Damian.
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This is a powerful, deeply moving piece, my friend! Too many people confuse the claim to possess somebody with love. Love blooms only in freedom and mutual respect! Especially the sentence ‘I hate you for loving mé’ cuts like a knife.
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Hello Elke. Thanks for the read and wonderful comment.
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Read MoreBeautiful safety devicesDuring a heavy car crashAt a busy intersectionThey acted like an airbag Thanks to her silicone breastsFake boobs for safety on boardImplants protected her organsFake boobs for safety on board40DD was enhanced enoughFake boobs for safety on boardArtificial...
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Phenomenally penned, Keith. Clever write my friend. They might also work as flotation devices as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks!
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Read Morethey tell her all the time"you're so pretty"she smiles with a little sighand thanks them politely but she was raised to rememberflesh is only the outer layerwhat matters is the insidehow she treats othershow she behavesand what she does with her...
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A great piece, this is great advice for both males and females. Tight
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I believe it would be great for both. I only experience this world through the eyes of a woman though. So she was raised to be the fiercest woman she could in a world that often only sees our outer package
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Wonderful write! Reminds me of my daughter, too. They are miraculous, aren’t they?
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I’m constantly flabbergasted that she was raised by me. They are incredible indeed!
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Beautifully done.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Willow. In the book it belongs! Excellent tribute to your daughter, such a powerful message my friend. Amazing arrangement that fit the power of the meaning. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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She’s on an upswing now but the pandemic took the wind out of her sails. As a fellow Pisces, you know the fluidity of y’all’s fierce nature. She will rock the world. Thank you, my friend
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hello beautiful Willow you did beautiful job raising and guiding such a spirit ❤️
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I did the best I could. I just wanted her to be strong in her sense of self. I never was and it took a toll. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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This is so heartfelt since I have 2 girls myself. Love what you wrote about your daughter.
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Given the right encouragement, girls are incredible forces to contend with. Thank you, Fia
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I have witnessed this. To pay close attention to another’s entire being is to be rewarded with infinite wonders and friendships.
Your poem is so thoughtful and tender while bearing a harsh truth.
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It’s aggravating for her to have thoughts and not be heard because they’re focused on the wrong things. Some would say it’s their loss, but its hers too. And mine. And every woman summed up by her physical attributes. Thank you, Jim
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Awesome awareness of her value. It is old news, that our looks will fade and our health will wane, so what we have of value on the inside is what will sustain us. That fortitude to be a decent human even if surrounded by “less”. it is our shine, our aura, that will never fade. Sounds like she has hers intact, probably many thanks to you, dear Willow.
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She’s a force to be reckoned with. There’s not much I’ve done that I’m super proud of, but raising her is top of the list. And to be honest, she teaches me now. Full circle. Thank you, Styxian
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Her pedigree of character and consciousness has never fallen
far from the Tree that bore the amazing fruit she has blossomed intoMuch respect always
Naaj
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I have my Roots to thank for setting an example that I was honored to teach her. It always comes back to the roots. Thank you, Naaj
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This is an awesome tribute to your daughter, dear Willow! You raised her in the light of the only true values that matter – sustainable values of love, peace and understanding. You must be very proud of your daughter. She is really beautiful, she has a beautiful soul!
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She is my rock, my shining star, my inspiration and my greatest joy. I am indeed very proud of her! Thank you, Elke
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Excellent .. I just know for sure you are both so very lucky .. just being and having each other .. write on Willow 😎🌻👍
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For a long time all we had was each other. I chose to be her mother first, not a buddy. Now I have a best friend. She’s forbidden me to die. We’ll see how that goes… Thank you, Neville
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I only raised her so far…and the rest is her own indomitable spirit. She speaks, I listen. I am amused how often we say the same thing at the same time. She used to roll her eyes. Now she just laughs. I guess there are worse things than thinking like her mother. Thank you, girl
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I enjoy walking my dog as well.
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They are innocent and lovely companions…
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I’m finding it more difficult to get away from real life and its problems that grab me by the arm and pull me away.
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These are complex times Tim.
Eat right and exercise and write a poem or two to stay sane …
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That second stanza is fire had to sign in to comment. It would had exploded with one of your art pieces. Tight
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I stole that solitude line from a poem I wrote on DUP. Solitude is a remarkable life quotient. Grab it when you feel it and cherish it …
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It’s dark these days on our morning walk…
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Yes, I put a light up collar on Onyx so she’s easier to see … it helps
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Beautifully penned, Speak. Nothing like a walk to think things through, you know figure shit out. It’s nice to have a companion come along for moral support. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You are so right Damian
A dog walk is a zen experience in some ways …Thx Sir D
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Those little moments captured seem so simple but they can be quite profound. I haven’t walked a dog in years, but there’s a peacefulness to it that I still remember. Neither of my remaining granny cats would ever submit to a walk. Drop over like cadavers if you put a harness on them. Cats…
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I love the quiet of the dawn.
Very few people out.
Mostly joggers, people walking their dogs and and nurses going to work.Poems sometimes come to me on these walks.
Personally I think it’s my best poem DUP ceased operations ….
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Nice.
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Thanks A !
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Powerfully penned, Keith. There are dangers everywhere, clever write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian