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Read MoreYour time has come young personmuch sooner than you thoughtrelease your mouth from your mother's nipplethere's a lesson here to be taught you seek instant gratificationand vain internet validation I'm a forward thinking manyes, a problem solvercan you put your phone...
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I did. That’s for another day. Thanks man. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreThe cuckold generationtide-pod guzzling snowflakesbegging to be micro-chippedbegging to be numbered Xenophobic and neuroticdisconnected and psychoticreprogrammed and roboticGeneration Zero seeking- individual identitytrapped- in a surrogate reality no social skillsno common sense Easily offendedlooking to accusebegging for defensefrom genuine experiencestampede of the sheepmarch to...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Damn, this is brutally honest my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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These generations that came after us, are self absorbed in their own illusions. To much technology. It is brutally honest. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Read MoreI am an abandoned building a series of echoing roomscreaky whispering floorboardscrowned by star freckled roofas time advances and takes its tolla structure solid...and decayingunhidden...but strangely unseensecrets bursting...but unspokenthe stories these walls could tell...memories from rafter to foundationit takes...
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I love abandoned buildings and urbex, places that have personality & soul. It really makes you think about all the stories and feelings that haunt those rooms long settled into stillness and the quiet noise of slow decay, so much like those old folks now mostly forgotten.
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I am an urbex hound myself and feel much the same as you. I suppose that’s what made me follow that theme. Thank you 😊
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Fantastic, and abandoned. Excellent.
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Thank you 😊
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Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Excellent write my friend, your choice in accompaniment fit your words nicely. You have an ear for it in fact. Nicely done as always. I dig this a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Coming from you, that means a lot. I try to hear what the words are saying. They always have a voice of their own and I guess I enjoy and connect more easily with them than with people frequently. Just gotta listen. Thank you, my friend 😊
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Art at its best. We’re lucky to have you here Willow.
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Thank you so much! You just made my morning beautiful 😊
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Now it matches you. 🙏💖
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Willow, I hardly know what to say. It is a great honor to have something named for me. I am doubly pleased that it is a decaying old thing which — no, this is not an insult!– that it creaks, with unspoken stories and strangely unseen secrets; the wind does whistle through my cracked windows, my friend, and curiosity still burns with undying heat. another story is always waiting. Yes, you couldn’t have painted a better picture of me with a camera. Thank you for this lovely, lovely gift!
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The stories untold are moments lost. When nobody asks, they remain locked away. My elders have been my rocks. The Roots I grew from. Without those stories, I wouldn’t be who I am today. Your young ones must feel the same of you, my friend
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Bravo, Fia. You know how to tell a story my friend. This is really good, can’t wait to hear more. Take a bow!! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊 working on the next part
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Never hearing your voice before, Fia 👀👂
I did not know what to expect, but I can’t say I’m disappointed in any way … actually, I was quite taken with how smoothly soft ‘n sultry, creamy ‘n smooth it is, as though my mind was being caressed through my ears on a warm, gentle breeze by a hundred dandelion flowers.
I heard no reason for the “Adult” sticker … YET, anyway. Now, at least, I’m prepared for any sweetly naughty surprise one might hope for!. ; p
Anyone ever tell you you’re a VERY talented lady?
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Thank you, Richard. I put the adult sticker because I figured I might as well start from the beginning. lol
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Hmmm?
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Working on it. Had a head cold. I Sound nasally
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Ohhh, NO, Fia!
Don’t tell me you normally sound like Betty Boop? 🙄
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Amazing! You’re a talent!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. At least your balanced my friend, if I remember right you even went after your own generation in a write you posted on DUP. lol. No one is safe from your wrath. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian