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Thanks so much for listening, DK. Glad you enjoyed the interview my friend. I have bass in my voice, lol. So I’m told anyway. It was all Fia’s idea to record it, I thought it was cool as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That was so much fun. Thank you for the interview, Damian
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You’re welcome my friend, and thank you! It was fun and a great idea you came up with. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I think these are so cool. Everyone likes to be heard, and everyone has a story. It was also a great idea for you to be the final interview. Protest poetry haha. Maybe anarchy poetry? Plenty of subjects this world has.
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Thanks so much for listening, Nick. Everyone does love to be heard, and most writer’s including me love to talk. lol. A million subjects out there. Thanks for the support my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Superb work.
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Thanks so much for listening, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the interview my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m so glad this one made it’s showing. I was going to ask whose page it was gonna end up on but ya beat me to it. It needs to be here! Man behind the questions. And now a new chapter begins? Who’s next, my friend?
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Thanks so much for listening and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the interview my friend. Fia, was cool with it being presented with the others. I’m glad it’s here as well. Time will soon tell. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Ok let’s begin.
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Yes, Thank you for commenting;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. You know how to start a weekend my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes,lol. Thank you, Damian
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Excellent
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Thank you, Thomas
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Verses written by delicate nails. Well done! “)
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Read MoreAs we ease into the summer months, I’d be remiss if I didn’t remind you to carry the essentials every poet and writer needs. If you’re old-school like some of us, don’t forget your trusty pen, a small notepad, and...
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Thanks, Fia. I’m subscribed to the news, thanks for the info. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Shift + Enter. I didn’t know that. That’s gonna be a time saver haha.
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Great ;))
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
Welcome to another edition of Stars Rite News and Updates!
As we ease into the summer months, I’d be remiss if I didn’t remind you to carry the essentials every poet and writer needs.
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Read MoreSeveral weeks at sea and no flower as yet. The crew was still in high spirits due to the captain’s demeanor Vivian suspects. She has been watching him since the day they set sail. The way he treats his crew...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Love this story my friend, the dialogue definitely gives it a 40’s vibe. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you and I appreciate your comments.
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Love what you’re doing, girl. Honestly, this feels much older than the 40’s to me. Darrius feels somehow like a pirate, and Vivian his captive. Of course, she isn’t a prisoner. Or is she? This is intentional.
And Darrius is such an egotistical SOB. What guy tells a woman that everyone on board can see her intentions? That’s a guy who is overly confident, a guy who wants to make things more difficult for himself, who creates a challenge from a gift.,
Love the dialogue. There’s limited description and imagery here, which is actually where you might more specifically date the scene as if that really mattered. My one suggestion would be backing off spoon feeding your reader about the thoughts and feelings of your characters. Let them act it out, and we can all come to our own conclusions.
You’ve got a lot to cover in two more chapters. The centerpiece of this mysterious journey has yet to be exposed. What would be the purpose of searching out a flower under the urgent circumstance of war?
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I will take your suggestion to consideration. Enjoying your take on this.
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Wow, that’s awesome. What a sexy voice, Damian. Cool idea too.