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Read Moredon't I just...today is not a good day...not for sarcasm or good natured teasingtrust me...good is not how I'll read itwords like gashes & blisterswaiting for the drainage I'm watching shadows of the windslicing pieces off yesterday to feed mesuch bitter fruit...with...
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Thank you 🧡
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This poem envelops me in its grip.
Sadness, shame, discord…I feel this way sometimes…jokes won’t humor me, pleasantries are the opposite of what I need.
Really strong, strong write.
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Thank you 😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, I felt this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Life is…lifing. Thank you, my friend 😊
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Superb work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Amazing, Willow. You keep impressing me with lines like, “slicing pieces off yesterday to feed me.” So strong and beautiful simultaneously. Keep it up. Please. And thanks for the audio version; you know I can’t help but gravitate to that. It is so well done.
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I’ve been slowly making spoken versions of many of my pieces. Just takes more time and energy than I currently have to spare. Thank you so much 😊
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Understood; I am doing the same while coping with bizzare-o-ness in my own world. But that’s okay, I get through with little tidbits of kindness from friends like you.
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It’s the little things that make a huge difference 😊
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Read MoreThey swim in fiber, without flesh or blood, drone sharks with soulless eyes, sniffing out clicks, devouring silence, with teeth of algorithm and calm. They don't roar, they don't scream—they merely suggest, with fake smiles and filters in a row....
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What an amazing and truthful piece. This word is fucked! Brilliance is written all over this piece. Great work my friend.
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Thanks! Appreciate you!
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Wow, what great metaphor in this.
The state of politics and the state of journalism.
And we fall for it all and go after the bait and get caught in the net of despair and anger.
Really strong writing…telling it like it is, reminds me of The Beats.
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Thanks! Appreciate you! Postmodern is a full deception.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, next level amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you back. Big hug my friend.
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‘The networks cast shiny bait, baits of likes, likes, promises.
And we, shoals of scattered attention, dance to the beat of their haste.Coherence? An extinct luxury, like fossils of ethics in digital museums.
Everything is fragment, everything is instant, in a feed that never returns.Time is no longer a line—it is a loop, an eternal scroll, without digestion.
Thinking has become an obsolete gesture, feeling, a notification.’Today’s essential thought, set within thinking out of the normal box – forever welcome. Focus on the might be will.. the other has had its day – perhaps?
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Everything is fragment. Future is always tomorrow. Appreciate you.
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Read MoreGood Morning, You did one thing wrong, you woke upIf I haven't told you beforeI'm tired of this rut As my stomach turnsAcid reflux burnsI know exactly what I must do Do you know how I feel? when you devour a mealGo look...
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Welcome back
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Thanks dude.
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Great! Happy to see you here. Big hug.
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Hello PAR. Appreciate the comments.
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hi Keith this is very honest❤
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Nice to hear from you Brenda. Thank you..xo
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If they were Krispy Kreme, I might understand the urge. But wow, Vol, this is so upfront and in your face, I think it
simply broke the mirror.
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HA! Yeah Krispy Kreme’s are good. That mirror has been broken for a long time. No need to fix. Thanks Jacob. Appreciate it!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend, you still bring it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Appreciate the comment.
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This is a hard hitting piece that tells more about the state of the relationship than about the outer appearance of this woman. If he looked at her with the eyes of love, everything about her from the messy hair to the stained dressing gown would appear beautiful to him. He would only see her inner beauty. But between the couple you describe there isn’t much love anymore.
Perfectly observed and put into words, dear Keith! Xoxo-
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Hello Sappho. You’re right. There is no love left here in this relationship. Only criticism and mockery. A wonderful observation only you can deliver my awesome friend.
Peace..xoxoxxo
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Kinda felt that way about my first husband. I have referred to him as Fat Boy and tiny-dick. Worst was that despite being nearly 400 lbs (I always say 600) and having a “stub” – he cheated! Add in the violence and threats…I wished for him to die.
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DAMN! I believe you mentioned “fat boy” & “tiny dick” in a few of your writes. Appreciate the feedback, always!
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Well, Damn, the reiteration of Go look in the mirror is a banger. People generally do not see what they become until they are forced to. Keith very, very open write
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True. Appreciate the feedback.
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Read MoreStrum me a lullabyto keep my mind at easeHold each note as it criestill I begin to sleepEach note is a storypressed and released in timeHold each fret in its gloryMove it slightly up or down. DevinePlay it soft...
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A touching tribute to music and musician. This may be the best compliment that a guitar player could ever expect. A feeling of peace and satisfaction is elicited in me.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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When I’m practicing guitar a little later, I’ll play you a few bars. 😉
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Aww thank you;))
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In G I’m thinking. 😉
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Maybe on a minor key?
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Oh my… Choices. lol
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Excellent poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim
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Now that was a song all on its own!
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Thank you, Willow ;)) <3
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Oh, my–are you talking to me? I’m being silly, of course. I’ve been playing guitar for a long time, so these words have special meaning. I love the image of this damsel being moved by the sound of the strings. Who knows what will happen at intermission?
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Oh Sam… Intermission is where the stories are created. Thank you
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This flows like a melody. Great piece Fia.
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Thank you so much ;))
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Very nicely poemed Ma’am .. Neville
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I always loved this one, cuz. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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Read MoreI don't know if your silences are calm seas or contained storms. If your eyes hold constellations or eclipses. If you are made of mornings that repeat themselves or nights that reinvent themselves. But in this not knowing, there is poetry. Because the...
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, amazing work per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian!
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hello beautiful Willow this is full of clever verses creating so much feeling ❤