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Read MoreCoffee Shop Chanteuse sweet Bourbon necklacelaced in cappuccino embersof lost quiet moonshinedeep in pirate alley kisseswhen Luna rides her stallionhigh in the heat of summer skyover spired flames of starsthat burn in a rhapsodyof dark river chicorywhose smoke swirls in...
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Thanks so much my friend. This lady was singing old jazz songs at the coffee shop today. She was my muse.
John
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Hello John,
Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.
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Deep gratitude Visions. I thank you from my heart and soul. Love that you appreciated my evocation of atmosphere through details. Great thanks.
John
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Gracias Damian. Thank you so much for reading and your appreciation of both me and my poetry.
John
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Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.
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Thank you so much Light for your heartfelt reflections on my poem. Your impressions of my words here are deeply appreciated. Love your interpretation of the mood within my words. Indeed there is a depth of understanding in your thoughts and the feelings my poem inspired for you that really feels right. Deep gratitude.
John
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You are very welcome my friend🤍
Wishing You peaceful and happy times🕊️
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Tremendous work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you so very much Thomas. Glad you enjoyed this. Much appreciated.
John
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Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂
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Deep gratitude my friend. Very glad you enjoyed this offering of mine. Much appreciated. Indeed the chanteuse who inspired this poem was an exceptional inspiration. 🙂
John
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You forgot a birthday. Well, it looks like you made up for it. lol
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I hope I dont forget yours … or ill surly be dead
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Sam, I hope you’ve learned your lesson! Maybe invest in a calendar? Lol, God forbid you forget an anniversary. 😉 Great read, just enough to get the blood pumping.
xx ~P.G💋
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what calendar ??? OMG there are calendars to remind us of those stuff???? crap…
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Hoi hoi
Love this one a lot. Really good write.
The corners of my mouth have a will of their own and keep on turning up.Did you ever considerate writing a song to the accompaniment of slamming doors?
If you are not going to do it, I will.
Well, honestly someone’s got to do it huh?I’ll be on the look out for your next.
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No I haven’t thought of writing that song… You are welcome to do it… I just need some time to heal after that birthday door slamming
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That story sure illustrates a great way to show forgiveness.
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I dont think ladies forgive… they will haunt you until you are dead …
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im sorry… I hope that heightened sense of arousal didn’t get you in trouble. ill go hide somewhere so you dont find me
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Read MoreA place where no-one walks inNobody walks outBodies waiting to be brought backPerfect the life re-agentInjection to the neckRe-animated victims, running amok They said 6 to 12 minutesBut Herbert proved them wrongThe price was highThey paid with their livesSecond birth...
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stellar ending dearest Keith ❤️
Re-animation… taking control
Re-animation… body and soul
Giving life, defeating death
Brain dead, heart stops
On your final breathI love it…
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Cool. Happy to hear you enjoyed this piece. Great film if you’ve never seen it. Thanks Brenda
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, always dig your breakdown of cinema. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Appreciated!!
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I have never watched the movie but your poem tells me everything I need to know. It is powerfully and vividly written and invites to further pondering. Awesome work, dear Keith!
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Thank you Elke. I appreciate it.
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Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing