Eyes of a hidden woman

Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

forget

Poetry

April 22, 2025

6

Darkness Bane, my hurt is insanecurled into a ball, I balkWith shivers of madness, I trembleSleek with regret, I stutterneedful cage of a somber toneReleasing these feelings, necessaryMy keenness can be felt deeplyIf you listen to the silent weepCloistered...

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4 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Adagio did you know god made certain vessels just to destroy as an example? vessels wrought for destruction I wonder if I am one of those 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you dearest Adagio 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Brenda. Such a powerful read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Cut The Shit

Poetry

April 22, 2025

22

When I tell you that my mouth is recklessDon’t always assume it is for pleasant thingsThere are times when my mouth and my thoughtsAre on a volatile level.When they created the abbreviation F.A.F.OThey had to have me in mindDon’t...

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18 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  hello lovely Fia it’s evident you are fierce lady 💕
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Brenda. ;))
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Fia….who made you so angry….it’s kinda powerful sexy too btw.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Peter
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Superb work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Mic Drop. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian
- Sam Nash
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  You told me… but I never listen… holy crap
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Hmmmm (arms crossed)
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Adira
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Hxx
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I am ok, thank you Dragon-Fire
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Someone did. I’m good Thank you Adagio
- Malaya
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Isn’t it strange that someone will say your mouth is reckless yet still choose to open up that can of worms. Once they do and we respond they don’t know how to act. It’s like, nah, this is what you wanted right, now you got it.. I feel every word of this.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Malaya
- FlatDaddy
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Oh, maybe this WAS for me! Ha, ha, ha! Brilliant, Fia, just brilliant. Now you HAVE to feel better! 🙂
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Haha not meant for you. lol
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Fret

Poetry

April 22, 2025

10

Darkness dread, my fear is fedIn the gothic gloom, squanderFeelings take a tollexpending them freelyleaves one with a dull acheemptiness ensues with fretful thoughtsI'm not liked of this, I'm surespurned affections answer for meLittle lady, so bareCover your nakednessa...

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8 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I can relate to this. Emptiness ensues fretful thoughts. So true.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you lovely Fia it’s just one of those high anxiety days you know?
    - Fia Naturie
      1 year, 2 months ago
      
      Understood
      
      Crimsin
      1 year, 2 months ago
      
      it will be okay 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Adagio 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you graciously beautiful poetess 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Brenda. A powerful read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you 💕
Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Nurtured By Sorrows In Childhood

Horror, Poetry

April 22, 2025

5

“Nurtured by sorrows in childhood”…what the hell does that even mean?I thought it, I wrote it.I lived it, I remember it…A child in darkness puts hell in ovation…but where was my heaven?I swear I was touched once then…by an...

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2 Comments
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Other heals me temporarily like a drug. But then the signs and symptoms of depression come back and I have e to write and publish more.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  It’s a lifelong battle, Daniel. Powerfully penned my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Mother's Hushed Eyes

Poetry

April 22, 2025

4

Passages of my childhood arise within my mother’s death gaze, bringing reminiscences of olden days. When in sadness in childhood we would speak in silent gaze. No mother left to envision me now, now within those quiet eyes....

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2 Comments
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  If you have any good suggestions on finding a literary agent that represents poetry books, by all means let me know lol. All the ones I’ve queried have never gotten back to me, honestly. Still waiting on one that I sent out a week ago though. 😒
- DampKitten
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  That’s a particularly powerful piece, Daniel. I love the subject matter and how you approach it. That’s fantastic.
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