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Hate hollows the spirit until nothing remains but the echo of its own ruin.
Only love, when remembered, can unseal what the heart has already buried. -
This reads like a moral reckoning set to a slow, steady drumbeat.
The contrast between hate and love is simple, direct, and effective.
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Ahh the processed food we consumed is decayed in desease…why was I eating when I read this. Good one. Good visuals
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent exorcism my friend. Seriously, in this instance that’s what I’d call this amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, John. Excellent storytelling my friend, this one tugs at the heartstrings. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is a lovely story. Love this line
“a reminder that even in dreams, our love carries the weight of our fragility” -
Dreams always have some kind of meaning behind them. Trying to figure that meaning out is the hard part. Perhaps the lost dress was a representation of words that were never spoken. Or desires never totally met. The ending is warm and affectionate. As a poet or writer, dreams can be of value, which in this case, was beneficial for a good story with a happy ending. 🙂
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Tim I love your insights here. Indeed you illuminate he hidden nature of meaning in dreams. Indeed, I do think the lost dress held a meaning. As did the atm machine. I could imagine the atm machine meaning that the love we had was never really about money but that she was looking for something more than what money can buy from me. Thank you so much for sharing your insightful thoughts here. They were greatly appreciated.
John
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Love how this is unfolding. Fav part is:
“What pissed Dorothy off was that she was doing this by herself
Because the Lion, the Scarecrow and Tin Man got scared and refused to help,”