That is so sad. Nothing at all.

Noooooooooo

Other peoples wives….lol

You can say anything to me….

And you my dear are a miracle.💋

Love the Dr. Suess format. Fun piece, despite the sadness.

My mom once shared with me that she and my dad never lost their passion for each other and were still, er. active until shortly before he died at 84. I wish all couples could be that lucky.

Love your rhyme!!!

But JFC I pray to never be this woman!! No nothing? At all? Ever? It’s quite miserable. :’( Great poem. xx
~P.G💋

Peter, congrats on your hardware for this piece! It’s truly excellent and you are definitely deserving! The rhyme is brilliant. The meter is spectacular. The subject matter is disturbing, but that’s what poetry is about. Despite the depressing circumstances, you still manage a subtle tongue in cheek sort of literary smirk… capped off by this reference to silverware.

Brilliant

Ah, Peter (and I choose that address on purpose, of course), folie a deux of the wurst kind (sorry, couldn’t resist), but terrible enough to be a winner, eh, P? A nice write. had me chuckling for sure. A nice job here.

The end of days, this is a very interesting write

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Great flow and nice imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Some very strong images. Good write.