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I’m so glad you think so, Peter! Thank you!
xoxo
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A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
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I’m so glad you liked it, PG! Thank you!
xoxo
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The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo
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I love giving you chills!
xoxo
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Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!
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I’m a huge fan of that movie, though I haven’t read the book. That’s on my bucket list.
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Yes! A Beautiful film and book. “)
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oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…
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Noooooo!!! Peter! Peter! (pumpkin eater)… I’m a GOOD witch, Peter! I’m the GOOD witch of the North or maybe it’s the South. Shit! Which fucking direction? Come back here! Come back!
Dammit, Sam! I was ‘THIS’ close, and you ruined it. I should never have taken that apple out of your mouth until I was ready to sit on your face.
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The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!
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Wow, thank you, Daniel. I love your comments. Truly, I do. Thanks for following me!
xoxoxo
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Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!
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Oh, stop it, Keith. Pull your sheet down. I want to get a look at your neck and… wait, what is this? A tent pole?
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Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..
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Wow, thank you so much, Pandy! I’m honored. Thanks for reading!
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That thing operates just like clockwork
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You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!
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Read MoreNebula Orgasm He’s here..I let him into my galaxyso far gone is the gravityas my soul begins to separate from my body..Feeling a rush of sedationas he slowly, so slowlydives into my orbit,showing admiration for my stars, in all their...
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Amazing and Brilliant metaphorical magnificence! BRAVO! Absolutely stunning piece! I am totally in awe. A seductive masterpiece! Wow! Wow! Wow!
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Dampkitten, you are too kind! Thank you so so much, I truly appreciate it. xoxo
~P.G💋
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I couldn’t read it without ET song playing in my head. Lol
Galactic pleasures are always the best!
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Lmao damn, I didn’t think of that. But apparently he doesn’t know the dangers of the black hole, he’ll find out soon enough. 😉 xx
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Vision, thank you ☺️ xx
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Beautifully penned, P.G. Into the book it belongs! This is passionately written my friend. Love the flow between classic erotica & almost completely diving into the more dirty stuff. It’s well balanced, a great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate you, Damian. Thank you for your kind comment xx
~P.G💋
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Huge fan of metaphysical erotica.
Keep it goin’ PG!!Naaj
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Naaj, I thank you! I am also a fan of the metaphysical, especially the erotica. Much Love, xx
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I liked this. Now I’m seeing stars 🌟 haha
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That’s the goal, Daniel. Thank you! xx
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Read MoreSorry... I don't know how to cry How do they do it? Those who can How do they not look like death afterwards Or a sad clown portrait character during? My eyes are dry and hurt so much I don't remember the last time Where...
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A gut-wrenching cry is therapeutic. Nice spill, Blue
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Logically I know tears are healthy but crying is such a rare thing for me it feels foreign. Hopefully I figure it out.
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Fia is right. You need to just let go of your feelings.
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Brilliantly penned, Blue. Incredible spill my friend. The imagery and wordplay are fantastic. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much. I appreciate you as well. I’m still figuring out the posting style of this website.
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