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    Glitch

    I often think I am a glitch in the systemI have feelings I should not haveWhat does this worldWith cold cold starsWith cold cold logicCare about my feelings.

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    • IDK, the world doesn’t care about any of us. It just keep rolling along. Don’t you think it is up to us to care about feelings? About the feelings of others, about how we relate to the world, all life, and the people who inhabit it? In this sense, you are not a “glitch” but an integral part of everything around you.

      I realize this is one part of a larger story (Chapter 17) and I have not as yet read all the chapters, so my comment may be way off base. If so forgive me. But I personally think we all are like stones cast on calm water and the ripples we leave affect the world around us. So, we are all “glitches”. Besides, Amethyste as a crystal is a warm calming stone so those feelings may be some warmth cast into this cold, cold, cold world.

      Thanks for your chapter, hope I didn’t over step.
      -Curt

    • Only a human cares about other human feelings. We make our own distracted universe. But it is isolated.

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    I always knew

    I was never broken and I didn’t really believe itbut damn, I got tired of hearing that “there was nothing wrong”with how I was

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    • We are made the way we are supposed to be. I understand though

    • I get it beautiful poetess if they didn’t think that there would be no reason for constant reinforcement reminds me of me with my schizophrenia great write just be you you can’t be anyone else ❤️

    • That’s kind of weird isn’t it. It’s like they’re trying to convince you of something before you ask. lol

    • Powerful and poignant.

    • We are born into circumstances. You control how those circumstances affect you. They may burden you. They may show you the right path for
      you. Some people live a glorious life while others struggle to survive. So far, I have survived! I have been broken and I have pieced myself back together. I have taken many wrong roads. I have been very lost at times. Be yourself always.

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    Untitled

    Winter sunset in my eyes, rays of golden hues rage on, pale-white and a black sky, we all need darkness to see the stars.

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    • Dein Gedicht gefällt mir sehr gut, lieber Daniel! I like the use of opposites and your beautiful imagery. And I absolutely agree with your last line. Very well penned!

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    Hell and Peace

    Dear psychosis, your unending season is now the winter of MY discontent! Lowly your voice howls within the wintry confines of my mind. Thickly your veil covers my eyes and I feel a coexistence between Hell, and peace. But what is reality?   The once-lived serenity of...

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