Like a snake coiled & waiting. We can see it & hear the rattle. Deadly venom is bound to be lethal. Well expressed, my friend. I will sit in your kitchen & watch you cook anytime. Maybe toss you a few ingredients

hello dearest Damian the flow here and delivery are powerful as well as the content being impactful💕

Tremendous work. You nailed it.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. Glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

A brief but philosophical piece about destiny. Well written and makes you think.

I love that it is riding a motorcycle. Nice piece Thomas;))

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Like this a lot. Cat’s are fascinating creatures. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks, I appreciate it.

I like your outlook on how life would be without poetry.

Oh so true sire. Perfect in every word.

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Incredible read my friend, very cerebral. Appreciate you.

Damian

You are too kind. Thanks.

My thoughts entirely.. ..great write.

I’ve bookmarked it.

Thanks.
I really feel this way.
Regards James

Yes machines do dehumanise.
deep down we all feel human.
Thanks for reading
Regards James

Thank you. Much appreciated.

Hello Thomas. For some reason I couldn’t click on the thumbs up to give you a like, but I wanted to say that this piece was mesmerizing and raw. Loved it!

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Death in a can, it’s not like the old timers who would tell you government cheese was fucking the best grilled cheese ever. Great storytelling and great imagery. Appreciate you.

Damian

I appreciate it.