I guess we all have our interpretations. I see a line of young people heading into a club or hanging out outside it to hear hip hop or rap. Many may disagree, but I see that kind of music as negative and detrimental. Just my two cents.

Tremendous flow here, my friend.

hello dearest Damian either they don’t read the situations or they are goading up to reveal what we know… through manipulation of a situation…they get me all the time this is one of your best in my opinion 💕

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved those lines as well, you’re right there is no such thing as a safe place in the world’s current state. Happy to read your commentary again, hope your music projects are going well. Appreciate you.

Damian

“While destruction lies around the bend”

It’s interesting how the word lies changes the entire tone when read as one definition over the other. This is such a cleverly written piece. And powerful, as you excel at, my friend

Fanfuckingtastic Damian. Powerful and packs a tremendous punch!

I kinda get an image of friends drifting apart maybe due to political differences.

Great ink, friend

I can’t sleep lately. I lay in bed hour after hour and wake up tired.
Getting older means bills, stress, and worry. I’d love to go back to the playground and start over.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

lol. I’m trying to accept your friend request. It’s giving me difficulty. I’m glad you are back.

Oh do I know this feeling my friend. You put it well and with a bit of playfulness. Loved reading this. Put me in a nostalgic feeling for the places and people long gone.

John

I like this. The wizbit made me remember Mork and Mindy.

I enjoyed this science fiction story

Phenomenally penned, Sam. Great write, fantastic imagery my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fantastic, Samuel.

Thanks, Thomas.

Well, I would say you have outdone yourself, Sam — but obviously, you haven’t. A good bit of fun, though. Worthy of a series? Only 14,089 more chapters and you’d have a book, one that would fit in one of those tiny saucers. Keep up the good work, Sam.

Thanks. I’m working on chapter II right now–Dogbik confronts a gas pump and says “take me to your leader”

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

What a charming little story. I didn’t know how it was going to end up going about halfway through but alls well that ends well.

A heart-warming story, Sam. Your characters always have personality that is lovable in some way…even a cat. 🙂

Ah, the sweet, gentle world of an innocent young girl (I’ve one posted simply, “Girl”).

Sam,
You never fail to touch your readers’ hearts, minds, ‘n souls in bringing to life your characters’ personalities (even a cat’s), and in how they each fit so perfectly into your stories’ always interesting plots … and, your grammar is exemplary.

This is a most lovely piece, and I love the surprise ending.
I hope you like it here, Sam … the site needs your “special” touch! ⁓ Richard🖌

Thank you, Richard.

Thank you. Yeah, scary stuff for Halloween.