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Read MoreA window holds its breathas the day thins to a pale wash.Frost gathers at the corners,soft as dust. Someone walks past,coat brushing the airand sending in a brief drift of coldthat sharpens a thoughtthe way cold sometimes does—clean, immediate,quietly sure...
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Thank you so much, Styxian. You are deeply appreciated 🙏🏻🕊️
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is this a scam or what?
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need help deleting comments the one above by Benjamin3903 is a malicious link. Do not click in it!
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Read MoreThe soughing whispers of the Damned Bleed across this dying land And I will never see your face again.
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This feels like the opening of a horror poem. Nicely done
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Thanks for reading
Regards James
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powerful poem dearest James ❤️
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Dear K,
For me, I appreciated the sense of loss in such brevity. Those quiet whispers in nature say so much if only I could understand the language. Terrific write. H🌷
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Thanks for reading.
There is a magic on the wind through trees and waves and grass
regards
james
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Read MorePoetry wasn’t a choice.It showed up at my doorlike a small, rabid animalI needed to nurture. Like a scar,like my eye color. Before book sales,before applause,before anyone gave a damn. I was jaded by color.Sunsets weren’t cute.They were edible —pink and orange,soul...
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The last stanza is brilliant. Love it and the poem. Great work!
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Thank you.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Preach my brother, preach! You nailed this out of the park. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Awesome.
Indeed, it’s that little angel/demon upon our shoulder, compelling us to write something, anything, to relieve the pressure of wanting to say something to the void. Life?Love?Pain?Loss? All of it.
Your write is terrific. I think we all write “for ourselves”. yet to have someone acknowledge our words does mean a lot. It makes us feel like it does matter, after all.-
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Thank you. I agree…it is nice when someone acknowleges us.
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Excellent ink & Not a single drop wasted .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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Yep. That’s just the way it is. We create because that’s how we deal with the world.
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so true.
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That last stanza…is everything. It’s never about accolades. It’s because we must. Damn…
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So true.
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Read More“winter palette"Winter leans inwith a painter’s restraint,lifting soft bluesfrom the frost’s first breath,letting tree‑shadows sketchsilver across the ground.Branches rise like quiet script,each stroke a reminderthat pared‑back beautyasks only to be seen..
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Outstanding piece. Great detail in a few words.
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Thank you so much, dear friend. Most appreciated as always. 🙏🕊️🤩
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Read MoreFroward.I found the word highlighted in my Bible.I remember liking how it rolled off my tongue. And thinking about tongues,all the women I loved over the years came to mind.Red dresses dancingbetween shots of rock gutand sloppy bar bands. Wayward.Full of...
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate it.
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Brilliant .. sums it up perfectly .. Neville
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Thank you Neville. I appreciate you.
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This is fantastic poetry writing my friend! Gritty, strong, like a shot of whiskey. Colorful, great story telling, and imagery. Great work.
John
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Waw raw and I can see the imagery in this.
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Thank you so much.
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Goldenmyst said it accurately. I concur wholeheartedly.
But, thunderbird? My god, man. At the least Seagrams 7 !!! LOL
This is very good writing. A bullseye on a dartboard of a swanky bar life.
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lol. Thank you, my friend.
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Outstanding and real. Nice work.
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Thank you.
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I love how you wove it all together into a cohesive story. There’s an underlying homage to the women and their fire and marks left on you that ties this all together so beautifully. I can’t help but think you made a difference in their existence as well. Fire water or no, this one is brilliant
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Thank you. I appreciate you.
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Simple but very effective. Creates a poetic scene for the reader to envision easily.
Well done.