Passionately penned, Neville. This is an excellent write my friend with amazing flow. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Age will come for everything and everybody. The poem is lovely, though I’m not sure if it’s about a woman, a flower, or something else. Are we lucky or cursed to be so affected by beauty?

The news kicks my anxiety up. Even the local news makes me have to pray to get home safe because the number of things that is happening is scary as hell and now you add what is happening in another country its worse.

Powerfully penned, Neville. Into the book it belongs! Raw and truthful and on point my friend, excellent write. I’m so tired from observing all this chaos, I have to to take some time away from it as well. Nicely done.. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love this piece…🙏

Cleverly penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Sounds good to me. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliantly penned, Neville. Like the layers my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Oooh, now this one has a haunting, almost taunting feel to it. Leaves me wonder…are these mourning doves?

Bless you Willow .. maybe henceforth, I should call you Hawkeye .. You are certainly most astute ma’am .. Neville 🤍👍

This hits like an abandoned chapel breathing on its own. The spacing slows the reader down just enough to feel the echo, the hollow pride, the loneliness clinging to the walls. That last turn—the ghost of me by your side—is quietly devastating. You let atmosphere do the heavy lifting, and it works.

Haunting but also a soothing demeanor somehow. The ending caught me off guard obviously. It makes the read have a different angle, reading back. It’s a well done piece, Neville.

Strange how awareness changes and we see or feel things differently from one time to another, sometimes the message is cloud and clear, sometimes it’s gentle and blurry, but all of them are messages that we are not alone. I feel sadness and speration, yet I also feel how the speaker got and felt the message, found comfort within it and just wanted to get it through and sing it into words 🤍

I feel as if I have been promoted to something very special .. Bless & thank you dear Light💕

Beautifully quiet and contemplative. You made me pause.

Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. You’ve been missed around here. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is really deep and that time needs us is very interesting thought.

This takes me to the thought…if it’s not noticed, is it real? Time is one of the most precious gifts, and it’s not an infinite sum allotted. Pay attention to it. It’s gone between one breath and the next. This is brilliant in its simple complexity. It’s good to see your words again

What Willow said.
An awesome take on what is so taken for granted.