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Read MoreWhen she walks on by she's so beautiful… The light in her eyes is warm-spirited… She never looks my way and it is wise… I once hurt her and I can't forgive myself… I've become something new within her darkness… Consumed by her cold...
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Read Moregirl, you been sitting on that barstool but you ain't drinking you running or thinking?cuz I know the look in those eyesstare into the darkness they can't hideevery nightwhat's on your mind? I’ve been on the outside looking inonly my past knows...
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Mary and I thank you from the bottom of our hearts. This was an expression long in the building and much in need of voice.
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Powerhouse,both of you are amazing women.
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Thank you so much, Thomas. We greatly appreciate you
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Really love this, the two of you simply rock Ladies
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We needed to give this one its moment. Thank you so much on behalf of both of us
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Powerfully penned, Willow & Mary. I love the guitar riff in this, and have got to ask what was that? A cello or violin at the beginning and end with a distorted effect on it. Whoever made that call, that was pretty cool. Nice collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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That was indeed a cello! That was my call. Cello has the same deep gut effect as bass…which is my obsession. Mary digs violin more. But I’m rubbing off on her. 😉 We poured ourselves into this one. Thank you so much, my friend
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This is one inspirational powerhouse of a collab
Take a bow, ladies.
Ya’ll have definitely outdone yourselvesMuch respect
Naaj
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Thank you so much, Naaj. This was a labor of love and a reignition for us both. I’ll pass along your words to Mary 😊
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Read MoreOur flame light has faded to shadow… The last hiss of our candle has come… It's sooty wick now cold and black… That delicate glow once soothed us… Long ago, our rose bloomed amongst ruins… Within the warm breath of the candle… Whose flickering flame...
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Read MoreOnce attached and following her every move, I am now what was mimicking her in life. Now there in the background, merely so, I am now what was… Damaged, hurt, and longing to have her back! I am now what was… Now lingering as...
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Short but quite interesting. it says a lot in a brief amount of space. Quite good, really.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Perhaps! The best poem that I have read on Stars. I am not very good with comments, but this one grabbed my soul, Lady! This one deserves an award.
Al
PS. Keep in touch.