I’ve a theory, Fia 😏

Lines of poetry that most appeal are those the reader has felt and most easily relate to … either that, or have fantasized and dreamed.💫

I thought you might find a little bit of favor in this one.

Fia, your reviews are always like a happy hug!
Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard🙏

Hello, Benjamin 🙏

It’s a distinct pleasure to meet you and to receive your graciously appreciative review for one of my humble pieces.

If you’d the mind to, I’ve no doubt you could use my American Sestet format to compose a virtual masterpiece of your own, that every poetess and poet would envy … and, I must take issue with your comment, “for undisciplined free-verse poets (such as myself)”. I say this, because there’s nothing simple or easy about Free Verse poetry … in fact, due to its lack of pre-set structure, it’s one of the most complex and skill required of all poetic forms, when composed properly.

Then, I thought seriously about whether to include the session on Free Verse from my group “Back to Poetry Basics” to explain why I said above, that “I must take issue with your comment.” And, decided, “Why not? It’s free and will exemplify exactly what I meant.”
I would love it if you join-in with the group, too: https://starsrite.com/groups/back-to-basics/

So, here it is:
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SESSION THREE
Wednesday, November 11th, 2025
This session will be on the Free Verse form.

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FREE VERSE

Because its unrhymed without a set meter or syllable count, the Free Verse is considered the most versatile of poetic forms. But, to be powerfully effective, it must flow smoothly and is NOT a narrative or prose form … it must have a poetic voice, spoken with rhythmic word-flow, with thoughts, feelings, emotion, and expressions grouped into verses, with appropriate line-breaks and enjambments.

“Properly” composed Free Verse poetry will display correct grammar, including capitalization and punctuation … in other words, composed in such a way that any reader can follow and understand what the author intends and wants them to grasp in rhythm, speed, mood, inference of thought, feeling,, meaning, and emotional timbre (‘tambor’ – voice quality, tone color, tonality, resonance, etc.

The heartbeat of Free Verse is imagery, metaphor, poetic syntax, and poetic voice, well-placed line-breaks and smooth enjambments.


“Iambics” work well with Free Verse, too.


There is no limit to lines or verses, topic or theme, mood, or otherwise.

(Free Verse example by one of my graduate students: her last name is coincidental … not a relative.)

COLOURS OF LOVE

“What do you think
when you look at me,”
you ask?

All I can do is stare,
teary-eyed,
speechless,
trying desperately
to find adequate words
in describing
such a beautiful life-form
standing before me.

“I see colors of love,
as I have never
seen them before,”
I finally say.

“I see tangerine hues …
fiery reds of new dawns;
saffron of rising moons
against star-sparkled
midnight blue
of nighttime skies.

I see golden suns,
silver glints dancing
in softly beckoning eyes
of …
fervent lovers.

I see rainbows,

flowers – I see, colors
laid at my feet
when kismet
first painted

You ~
into my lonely
black ’n white world.”

Dorina Jolene Jenkins
22 Nov 2012

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We’ve covered a considerable bit, some of which you may already know and are merely brushing-up, while others are altogether new in the finer details of the Free Verse form.

Questions or comments? Make them here so we can all share, or if necessary, message me anytime and I’ll get back with you asap.

Lastly, write your own Free Verse poem from what you’ve learned so far. It can be about anything you conceive of. We can share them together next session and sort out anything that might be amiss … above all, “Enjoy!”

We’ll see ya after tomorrow’s lesson … ’til then, “Keep Freeversing!” 

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Thank you sincerely, Benjamin, for the honor of receiving your appreciated approval, praise, inspiring words in review, and expressed enjoyment of this original American Sestets piece.

I like “gauzy”, too! ⁓ Richard🖌

Many thank yous, Damian 👌

It’s always a joy to have you select one of my humble pieces toshare, and to receive your gracious praise.

“Happy Holidays 🎀 Syr!” ⁓ Richard🖌

Many thanks, Thomas👍 (my brother’s name)

It’s always inspiring to receive your accolades.

Happy Holidays! ⁓ Richard🖌

It’s an honored joy, Gus 🌿

To receive such gracious words from a fellow poet who takes keen interest in poetic format.
From some years past, I am familiar with the Hickeldy Pickeldy Dutch form, and (unlike you) have composed but a few, one of which I’ll post for your entertainment.

I thank you most sincerely and appreciatively for your interest in my original form “American Sestets” … and, would be honored if you were to compose one of your own … we’ll call it a fair exchange, me with your Hickeldy Pickeldy, you with my American Sestets. 😃

As Bob Dylan sang, too, in his “Tangled Up With Blue ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YwSZvHqf9qM ), “I’m keepin’ on keepin’ on”.
Kind regards, in-return, M’New Friend! ⁓ Richard🖌

I am an urbex hound myself and feel much the same as you. I suppose that’s what made me follow that theme. Thank you 😊

Thank you 😊

Thank you, Thomas 😊

Thank you, Damian. Coming from you, that means a lot. I try to hear what the words are saying. They always have a voice of their own and I guess I enjoy and connect more easily with them than with people frequently. Just gotta listen. Thank you, my friend 😊

Thank you so much! You just made my morning beautiful 😊

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The stories untold are moments lost. When nobody asks, they remain locked away. My elders have been my rocks. The Roots I grew from. Without those stories, I wouldn’t be who I am today. Your young ones must feel the same of you, my friend