That’s super fascinating history, Damian. I don’t really follow Black Sabath, but I am familiar with that particular tune. I’m stunned that Ozzy never wrote lyrics. The dude was super fortunate to hang around people who did.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. I agree, each lineup had its appeal. “13” was not that great. Especially when in comparison with the last record they did with RJD. Under the “Heaven & Hell” moniker. That was a killer album. Appreciate you.

Damian

I never knew that about Ozzy. I always loved how unapologetic he was. He was just being him and that is that.

Great write

So another case of the unexpected stealing the show & in this case, saving the day! Maybe record labels should start letting the music makers do their thing & see much it nets their infamous gawdawful bottom line. Gah…another intriguing story, my friend

I love the Wizard of Oz. This is cool.

Excellent.

Brilliantly penned, Cipher. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I didn’t expect it to go that way! I am not into short stories but that was steamy and rejuvenating. Well done, DampKitten!

Highly imaginative, Lady
Full of suspense sexuality and devotion.
It’s been a while since I have read story telling this good
Reminds me of the old erotica short stories I used to
read when I was younger

Great job DK

Naaj

Indie, thank you so much for reading and your specific recommendations. I’m sure you realize that the name, Charlie, was specifically chosen to surprise the reader in the way you mentioned – still, I like your idea to make it more obvious when the curtain finally rises on her identity. I’ll check on the parking lot as well.

Thank you, HJ! I’m glad you liked it!

Powerful work. Hot. Well crafted and steamy.

Beautifully penned, DK. A steamy erotic write, with fabulous storytelling, and an incredible imagination my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Never cease to impress. Always well written and deep (pun intended) lol. The story flows smoothly and hott hott hott 🔥 😋

Well, hopefully more than just sex – but thank you! I’m definitely into sex!

I keep missing the reply button!
I love your comments as always, HJ

So are you, girl, and thank you! No apologies for tears, but kisses for cleanup!

xoxo

You’re getting good at this😉

A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
~P.G💋

The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo

Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!

oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…

The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!

Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!

xoxo

Oh, stop it, Keith. Pull your sheet down. I want to get a look at your neck and… wait, what is this? A tent pole?

Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..

That thing operates just like clockwork

You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!