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May 20, 2025

CarmynThe names Carmyn, Carmyn Reynolds. After I graduated high school, I packed all of my shit and got the hell out of Cape May, New Jersey and into the city without so much as a single plan. My parents...

6 Comments

Fia Naturie
1 year, 4 months ago

This is a good opening. I like the defiance and the confidence she has.
Some Father daughter bonds are very tight. You portrayed that here.
Nice
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Fia, thank you. Yes she is quite something! It’ll only get better from here, thank you for reading! 🙂 xx
  ~P.G💋
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 4 months ago

Brilliantly penned, P.G. Amazing storytelling again my friend. I think you got the hang of this. Incredible read, I look forward to more in the series. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Damian, I thank you. I hope I can keep you intrigued.. it will get better from here my friend. xx
  ~P.G💋
Poetic Gawdess
1 year, 4 months ago

Keith, thank you! I’ve got to keep you all’s attention somehow. 😉 xx
~P.G💋
Poetic Gawdess
1 year, 4 months ago

I got you! And it’s one of those things where you think you’ve got it, but you’re not really sure. But I decided to take the plunge and here we are. I’m excited I’ve gotten so much feedback and you all are adding fuel to my fire. 😊