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hello dearest poet yes sadly thank you 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good afternoon thank you for reading and leaving a kind comment 💕
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Superb work.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously for reading and commenting 💕
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Read MoreDressed as black as lightless night,the stars exist only in your eyes.Penetrative, oval, emerald eyes which see right through me. Your dress, Victorian, with leather strapping which buckles around you. Signifying your social status. At your command, you gracefully slide a...
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Astounding imagery! That last stanza was interesting :0
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To be continued? Really good, Daniel
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This lady doesn’t fuck around my friend. Epically penned, Daniel. Incredible imagery. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI think of youAnd can’t help thinking about usAn openingAn unfoldingThe falling of wallsAnd guardsThe laying aside of old fearsAnd old livesAs the new opens before meIn layersLike the petals of a roseWith the coming of the sunGlistening with...
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hello dearest Joe so much passion inside you I am overcome with a feeling sigh to be loved like this beautiful 💕
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Life is hard enough. Love should feel like this. At least I think it should 🌼
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Aww, not a dream. That is perfect. Nice spill.
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Thank.you for the compliment, I’m glad this poem made you feel that way.🌼
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Read MoreIt’s that same song again, the one I imagine playing at my funeral. A funeral I’m late to everyday. Lying in bed, I wait for someone to notice the dead body and have it removed. But...
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Powerful. Stay alive.
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Why stay at all
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Powerful and profound… The Samurai believed that everyday one should consider oneself already dead. That we should meditate daily on death in the worst possible ways. Tis far out… Takes great bravery to endeavor upon such reflections. That is the kind of bravery I see here. The bravery to gaze into the abyss, which is perhaps an inevitability. Very nicely done thoughtsdie.
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Read MoreWe were standing nearby the sea…Drinking;It was night.And I had traveled from my cityTo meet my cousin;It had not been a happy decision,It was simply an intrusive decision,Of a devastated psyche,Caught by a mental breakdown;But there was this thing...
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Very good description, this book is shaping up. Nice
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Thank you.
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Your clear communication of your mental state is precise and strong. I felt like I should be there to show you that you are so much more than a little dot.
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Thank you for the support. I really appreciate it.
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