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thank you graciously beautiful poetess I deeply appreciate your thoughts on the nuances of the poem 💕you made me smile and touched my heart…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment 💕
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hello lovely poetess this is very interesting great write 💕
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Hello Crimsin. Thank you for the feedback.
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I liked this.
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Thank you a lot. 🙂
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You’re very good a setting up intrigue and suspense
Naaj
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Thank you a lot dear.
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My pleasure – dear 💖
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I love reading your unique and fearless poems Ms A
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You spoil me with your words and I like it a lot. 🙂
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Good. You deserve this spoilage. It’s sweet though. 😉
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Yes it is sweet.
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Read Moretwas daylight that ushered the darkness inwhen she on a sleepy day did sinsecreting my thoughts and dreaded deedon halted breath my wickedness shownsilently the storm brew coming without warningclouds of mistrust formed in the eyes peering at memy...
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Oh wow… I’d call this epic poetry because it tells a story. It’s also confessional.
I love this kind of naughty stuff, Crimsin. Riveting!-
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hello lovely Kitten good morning thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian yeah just a bit of fiction I appreciate you too 💕
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Hugely complex piece and I love the pic. I like how you use color to reflect emotion. Some great alliteration in this piece and the rare use of personification as well. It highlights the inner struggle as the body continues to persevere. Deep, tantalizing, thought provoking.
xoxo