We had to change our original comment in recognition of your ability to say bodies slapping in an acceptable way. Hahaha, on the for real Lady we love it, it makes us think of slow love. Tight

This drifts between tenderness and urgent intensity, capturing the physical and emotional in a way that’s intimate without being flashy. I love how the language makes the body feel like both terrain and vessel, with every moment earned and alive.

Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write, you always deliver the goods my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
You are being rather harsh on yourself, labelling this as 17. Or you are living in a different part of the world.

This kind of love making I learned/learnt from another beautiful lady.
I can only hope that I can get you to rub off on me the way to describe it the way you do.
This is almost French by nature. You can get away with most everything, as long as you mind your language.

Needless to say I love it to bits!
Warm regards, Gus

hello beautiful Fia so deeoly passionate I have felt this in my lifetime ❤️sexy and powerful write…

Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is darkly charged and unapologetic, leaning hard into seduction and danger without blinking. I like how the poem owns its fascination with shadow, letting desire and menace speak in the same breath.

Thanks for the news, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Great info, thanks!

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère C.,
On DUP my nom de plume was Jilted Johnny.
Not practical, because on SoundCloud the seemed to be somebody with the same name.
I like it that you use Jilted in this very beautiful new poem of yours.

Love it a lot. The artwork too.
An awful lot.
Warme groeten, Gus

hi dearest Gus you honor me with your presence thank you my friend and jilted I can’t see it I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️

Cleverly penned, Amethyste. Excellent write, I enjoy your observations my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love the way this lingers on curiosity and small wonder, questioning the human need for beauty in a world that often feels void. There’s a quiet fascination here, observing what we cherish and why, without judgment—just attentive, almost tender.