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Read MoreAnchors slip away in a sea, calmed by nightly solitude. A puff of wind, eases a bedroom shade open. A flake of dust, drifts alone, gently on.
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Read MoreWhat remains of my sun? Clouds, facades of the high skies, obscuring mirrored daystars of my eyes! There toy are in my sky, whirling in tears in the wind. I want to reach up and grab hold of you. I see the two searing-white pearls of...
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Really like the closing line…
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Title is an attention grabber. Third stanza is so sad.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. That ending drives the point home my friend. Exceptional write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe season of a broken heart is upon me.Heartsick, this burning pain roarswithin my stricken heart chambers.The budding of my youthful heart,my tempestuous squalls - the wildfire of my youth. A blooming summer heartglowing with affection in the light which I bask.An...
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In the furnace of my heart, my desires hibernate. favorite line
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Haha, definitely a poem for the winter season, however, going through my archive I just had to post this now… 😉
Daniel
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI sit here in silence as I watch my mother go through the ceremonial lighting of the candle. This is not something bad; it is the norm for our family. Once a year, we all, the female patriarchy of...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! This was incredible storytelling, and I even welled up with tears, I knew that the Butterfly and professor was a metaphor for something really going on. Powerful ending, the foreshadowing was precisely executed. Thank you for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, Damian. I was trying to think how a young person would convey what is going on in their own way. Not all of them come straight out and say anything.
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Truly beautiful.
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Thank you, Thomas. It is a hard thing for most people to read.
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Marvelous write. Well done.
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That means alot, Keith. Thank you;))
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Sensational write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian