Ooo I like this. realizing you have succumbed without touching. Nice

taking its breath away with my passion to live
greeting the sour with the sweet
very powerful Crimsin Like this line alot

Powerful and deeply raw. I love how this begins with pain almost having a personality of its own, trying to seduce the speaker into surrender, but gradually turns into a declaration of survival. “Taking its breath away with my passion to live” really stood out to me—it completely reverses who holds the power. The ending beautifully captures resilience: accepting both the sour and the sweet, yet refusing to bow. 🖤

You writing is powerful and if I was a person to weep easily. I would be crying. there is so much pain and suffering.

The circle of the streets has been going on year after year with only a few changes to show for it. But as a people we must be the ones to make a difference, accept personal responsibility and hold those accountable for their actions.