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Read MoreJust speak to meand you’ll gaze into thewilderness behind my eyes.This wilderness,lush in dreams,barren realities!As I open the gate for you,I sit and listen white-knuckledto the voices within my mind.The further you trek in my mind,the closer to summery...
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Read MoreHeaven can wait…Death a distant thunderstormwith lightning strikes far offannouncing its distant presence.Suicide is not the answer.I do not want to hurtthose that show compassion.So, I’ve decided Heaven can wait.
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This is awesome Daniel…
Such creative format…
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Will do! Haha
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Read MoreStanding like a figure from some Twain adventure i keep wondering when drubin's gonna put beads in that hair when the fires came up from the underworld he spit them out with a harsh breath i swear I have...
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Thank you for taking a read and thank you for asking
This is an actual person. He runs a haunted house/fun house out on the edge of our community. I asked him if I could write something that was inspired by him. Wrote from a place of fear and loathing with equal parts hope and magic! That thing that draws you in even if you shouldn’t.
Bat
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Read More“Main Street, Side Street or that nut nasty back alleyThe Fuck Truck will hit those corners from Miami to Cali, “Even will make a detour along the Texas borderSo call 1-800 Mr. Pussy to place an...
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And the Fuck Truck will try to be there. Maybe the next poem will be ‘The Fuck Truck House Call’
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Lol I know someone who would use that truck lol
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I know you are not talking about self interest? Lol
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Lol nope I’m a one man woman lol
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Great detail. The suspense and direction this poem goes is alluring. Nice work!