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Read MoreMost don't realize that we're just positive and negative energyHurtling through space and time in a giant atom as our penitentiaryWe have no idea that we have the ability to control the atom, space, and timeInstead of pairing up...
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We simply appreciate the read and comment dude, but so much of what we’re doing could be reversed and fixed. The crimes we’re committing against each other and to the planet could truly be healed if we chose to. Thanks dude
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Read MoreI'm still watching you make a fool of yourselfPutting skin tone and looks to high on the fucking shelfThe empire is crumbling, I can't make this shit any clearerThe end has arrived, it can't get any nearer Their hearts have...
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Read MoreSomethings gotta give, somethings gotta giveThey don't want me, they don't want me to liveIn nothing but a lion's mane I trekked the deserts of this earthI traveled across sheets of barren ice until I found it's true worth I...
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It does seem that the human race is destroying more than healing the planet we live in.
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Yes of course, we’re not the ant or beaver, engineering today for tomorrow. We have became destructive and wasteful for profit. Thanks Lady
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Read MoreWhy would you need to call in the militaryThreats of lethal force from a leader that's scarySmoke grenades going off, followed by a national guard forceFamily pitted against family ignorantly protesting the source This motherfucker was forseen a revelation agoHe...
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Woo, this is so much to unravel. History does repeat itself. Just new face.
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Take you time it’s all there we promise, Thanks Lady
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
But to no avail-this ship has sailed
If it was meant to be-he will return to me![Profile Photo]()
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A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
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very strong write. I love it. The fact that you built it up so much and yet carried the rhymes throughout, is quite an accomplishment actually. The message too, should be a mantra to all.
Well done amigo.