Chère L.,
Yes yes yes, amen to that.
It confirms our attraction to each other, our love, our being human, everything and than some.
And you wrote it in the best possible way.
I love it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus

Standing up applauding this. I agree whole heartily. Bravo

Thank you 😊

Beautifully penned, Lizz. Such a passionate write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

The physical is 10%, but the real satisfaction is the 90% mental connection.

To cool and it’s relatable to all that write, tight

Chère L.,
Beauty.
The Chinese version:
Beauty in the woods, where no one can hear it, is still beautiful

The greater Amsterdam version:
Beauty which is shared with other people, grows

It’s almost akin to:
Sometimes giving away makes me richer.
All this and more you gave us with this wonderful post.

If you’re American: Thank you very much
In all other cases: (please) keep on keeping on (Curtis Mayfield)
Kind regards, Gus

Powerfully penned, Lizz. Excellent write nicely transformed into lyrics my friend. It’s the little differences between the two that gives them each their own personality, while mirroring each other’s point in substance. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks 😊

I have to agree with Damian.. he says it best! 😉

Thank you 😊

Fantastic! Welcome to the site.

I love that this is not mere page to pen line..welcome to Stars Rite

Excellent 🌼

Beautifully penned, Lizz. The thrill of the write still stirs in us writers. Excellent flow and wordplay my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much 😊 though I’m still trying to get the hang of this site

Chère L.,
Hope this finds you well.

Love your Cabinet poem.
I read your introduction with pleasure and noticed your intention to put some of your poems to music.
I love that idea.
In fact, most of my poems are put to music. And what I post on StarsRite are poems of other people, as my Dutch poems are so much better that my English ones.

So (in short):
Welcome here and maybe one day we can do a cooperation.
Kind regards, Gus

Thus opened Pandora’s Box of erotic dreams, Lizz! Wonderful to have you aboard. – ‘HJ’

No, I was on one called DUP Deep Uderground Poetry but it’s closed down.

Totally love your flow Lady, to tight