Don’t count the minutes…..count the breaths.
Nice late night musing.

Damn, I can completely feel how it all seems like it can just slip right through your fingers…Time waits for no one and can be brutal with its incessantness, indeed

You created a universal understanding within your ink that most people can wholly identify with, especially once you’ve reached a certain age…

Wonderfully crafted – ty for sharing

🌹B

Your poetry always makes the reader think. This one is no exception. Nice work Damian.

Sigh…it takes us where it takes us. Regardless where you were going it took me to this…honor the memories, live in the moment. Ain’t nobody perfect. We’ve all got our demons. And they live where we can’t outrun them. There’s a lot in this one that speaks to different thoughts for me. Gonna be pondering this one for a while, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on from another angle I was looking at as well. You’re so very welcome, and thank you. Appreciate you.

Damian

Has a bit of eeriness and regret like “The Raven”. Wonderful ink.

” Still repairing mistakes already made

Can’t hide past demons in the shade ”

Man, that hit home!!!
this whole vibe is a mood provoker.

Great writing.

Naaj

Passionately penned, P.G. A very hot and intense write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Steamy erotica at it’s finest here. A titillating experience. Great!!!

Bringing the heat.

What a fine way to greet the morning….

BIG LIKE

It’s not summer yet, and still I feel the heat. Yes, yes and yea. lol

The explicit detail of your writing just drives the nail into me… so pleasantly pulsating. I’m a rhyme girl, and I like how you use it in your poetry. It adds a seductive quality to an already luscious piece.