This is a good opening. I like the defiance and the confidence she has.
Some Father daughter bonds are very tight. You portrayed that here.
Nice

Brilliantly penned, P.G. Amazing storytelling again my friend. I think you got the hang of this. Incredible read, I look forward to more in the series. Appreciate you.

Damian

Keith, thank you! I’ve got to keep you all’s attention somehow. 😉 xx
~P.G💋

I got you! And it’s one of those things where you think you’ve got it, but you’re not really sure. But I decided to take the plunge and here we are. I’m excited I’ve gotten so much feedback and you all are adding fuel to my fire. 😊

deep feelings here dearest Nick powerful write ❤️

Powerfully penned, Nick. Another great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Honestly, I can relate. But I learned…much to my surprise…nothing is impossible or unattainable. Unless we never reach…

I don’t like suits, and no comment on the perverted part haha. I wrote this some years ago but I think it captured the moment well.

Thanks for the read, friend.

This is a beautiful write, in a sad way. But beautiful nonetheless. So much about love comes with such tragedy, and most of the time it’s self inflicted when we don’t deem ourselves worthy of something or in this case someone. Idk if I translated that correctly but this was deep. Thanks for sharing. xx
~P.G💋