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May 25, 2025

Some say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...

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Thomas W. Case
1 year, 4 months ago

Superb
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Thomas 😊
DampKitten
1 year, 4 months ago

Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
Fia Naturie
1 year, 4 months ago

Thank you, Wil;))l
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 4 months ago

Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Damian 😊
Fia Naturie
1 year, 4 months ago

Thank you, Keith 😊
Poemstar
1 year, 4 months ago

This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you for reading this. Poemstar

Willow
1 year, 4 months ago

Brenda, this absolutely breaks the heart. I am sending you so much love & the biggest hug
- Crimsin
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  hello beautiful Willow thank you hugs back I will be alright I can’t help but write what I feel and everyday my mind is retracing it’a steps to the days we had together and how we got here ❤️
Thomas W. Case
1 year, 4 months ago

Powerful work. Heartbreaking.
- Crimsin
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  hello dearest Thomas thank you for the love on this write ❤️
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 4 months ago

Heartbreaking write, Brenda. This is powerfully penned my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.

Damian

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