Death has its clock. It will not be rushed or pleaded with, but when it comes, you cannot escape its grasp. This piece was done nicely.

Great write…. paraphrasing some other person….Death awakens us from the dream of life.

We seek the same end but I choose Dylan Thomas’ “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” way of getting there. Good write 🌼

If you can approach your death with this kind of dignity, then you will have won.

Powerfully penned, SW. Speaking truth on this one my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Raven xoxo

Agree with Raven. That is one helluva solid landing at the end

Some endings never end, others end before they’ve really begun, but always the questions remain. Well played 🌼

Powerfully penned, Fia. You stuck the ending my friend, love the sleight of hand on the last line. Very clever, indeed. Appreciate you.

Damian

Daniel, I love your stories; you do bring them to life.

Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling, amazing imagery my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Daniel this is magnificent. My eyes were riveted to the screen as your tale unfolded. A work of dark literary quality that was incredible to read. Truly a publishable story. Knowing this is just a chapter in your book amazes me. Truly fantastic story telling.

John

Terrific write Willow….very very good.🙏

All I have is a pen, girl, no sword. But what do they say? The pen is mightier than the sword?

The opening of this with the whispering was perfect. I can feel your words through the music nice melding.

Bella. Bravissima! 🌼

Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! The arrangement worked nicely with the words, whispers well placed, the piano was also a great choice. Amazing work my friend, excellent execution. Appreciate you.

Damian

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Superb work. Powerful.

Such eloquent passion and imagery. This definitely moves the imagination and the spirit