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    relent

    hideous need smiled at mecraving my pain, it desiredinsulting cave I felt it in my strengthpowerless seduction, I felt weakcaressing my dark I thought to risedressed in black cloaking my hurtwith a wild eyed expression I spy deathfighting his...

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    • taking its breath away with my passion to live
      greeting the sour with the sweet
      very powerful Crimsin Like this line alot

    • Powerful and deeply raw. I love how this begins with pain almost having a personality of its own, trying to seduce the speaker into surrender, but gradually turns into a declaration of survival. “Taking its breath away with my passion to live” really stood out to me—it completely reverses who holds the power. The ending beautifully captures resilience: accepting both the sour and the sweet, yet refusing to bow. 🖤

      • hello lovely poetess thank you graciously for such a giving comment…it uplifted me I was faced with my own mortality lately I didn’t know if I had the strength for a serious surgery but I did…I love life and chose to stay even given the state of things I was thinking of your poem and thinking a lot of people reason I won’t live long enough to suffer current descions but your righ our children will… beautiful work ❤️

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    Atalanta’s Chase

    She tore through dawn where shadows wake,Leapt through mist where rivers shake.Mountains shivered at her stride,Forests gasped, valleys sighed.None could match her feet of flame,No boast or bribe could stake a claim.The boar of Calydon, tusks like spears,Felt her...

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