I like your description on how you view the night as a symphony

Wasn’t it weird to hear she was a poet? It struck a chord in me and the loss was felt double. The world needs poets.

Powerfully penned, Fia. All this madness is getting innocent people killed, it’s insane the amount of blood being spilled by this death cult regime. A fellow poet and most importantly a human being was taken from her child and loved ones. I’m fucking disgusted by all this senseless violence. Nice tribute my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Nicely done, Fia, Thank you. It is hard to see anyone die so senselessly and ruthlessly, especially by someone who does it while cameras are rolling, knowing his act will be seen around the world. Perhaps that is why he took such a risk; but I think he knew that Trump and Noem would have his back. They all should rot in hell. Soon.

I always think of how these acts are only what we see. I wonder and am scared of what they do when no one’s looking.
Monsters, and honestly I don’t think much for their supporters either.

Great tribute, these are sad times Lady indeed. Wat you’re seeing is straight out of Hitler’s and the Nazi’s play book. This country played with this man and now is facing it’s possible end.

I woke up this morning and needed to speak of the murder. I had no idea there were already several pieces posted. Essentially we have a narcissistic sadist with his hire hitmen out there, acting like people are expendable. I watched the video with my daughter and we were both struck by how casually he shot her and then walked away like it was nothing. Because he knows his keepers will cover his ass. Empowering men whose natural tendency is cruelty was intentional, make no mistake. Their day of reckoning will come. Just not soon enough.

Were in some real trying times right now. This poem is well written and real to each word I read here. Nice job Fia..xox

Chère F.,
Lovely poem for a horrible happening.

Scene of the rhyme
Is always better than scene of the crime

Keep the courage, please…
Warm regards, Gus

At the minimum, it is manslaughter. She was attempting to flee, not harm. He could have simply taken one step back. Even if he isn’t charged with a crime, he should be removed from that job. He has an irrational temperament.

This is a beautiful tribute, and I will follow your lead and write one in honor of her.

I’m sure Renee would approve of any kind word through verse from another poet. Nice tribute.

I think I see the changes. It’s a beautiful, yet powerful poem.

Great tribute dude, as we said this is just starting here in America. There is more than two more years of of rights lost, invasions, and lies. Prepare

I felt the need to honor her myself this morning. I’m glad to see you arrived first. When they’ve silenced a poet, we must step up and carry on. I am…overwhelmed by the atrocity. And bracing myself for what’s to come from the hit squad next. Beautiful memorial

Cold, stark, and unforgiving—this grips the chest and won’t let go. You feel the frost, the loss, the helplessness. A bleak landscape carved from grief. Raw, precise, and brutal.

Drieks, this is great.

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics and a stellar arrangement my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

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Awesome on so many levels…

Agreed with Cipher so many great stanzas, you even came with the word play, to cool Lady.

Outstanding, girl! I can see Poe, sitting in a hardbacked chair pulled around backward so he can lean his arms on the top., and he’s tapping his toes, girl, and smiling big, while whispering, “Damn, I wish I were that good!”

As I understand it she was blocking Ice all day and causing trouble. When she tried to run she sealed her fate.
It was totally unnecessary to shoot and kill her though. That Ice agent reacted too fast and recklessly. As far as her running him over, I didn’t see it.

Clever title Nick…

Law enforcement is certainly overly militarized
and undertrained…

I had a friend get shot by the cops in a high
speed chase…

He drove toward one of the cops and they
fired though the windshield, putting two
in his computer…

I live in what has been described as a
large town…

So many forms of insanity have been
proliferated…

I watched the video. The hardest part for me was how casually he shot her. And then basically shrugged it off. Stop anyone from getting in their way of cruelty…permanently. That seems to be their philosophy. And it’s backed 150% by the cheese puff at the top and his psychophants

Excellent write Nick. Well written, raw and accurate. This is the real thing. Unapologetic! Nice work!

Powerfully penned, Nick. It’s a racist fucking gestapo looking to spill innocent blood, in the name of a cult regime. Raw and honest write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian