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    You are the sweetest ingredient...

    Hair smells like cinnamon,skin is as soft as butter.arching my back, adding curvesIntoxicating mixtures.Forest honey is on the lips,And flour, like tenderness,All plays in the hands,Turns into dough.I bake something special,out of my love and feelings.I sprinkle beauty...that I kept for you.The aroma...

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    • Chère K.,
      Hope this finds you well.

      In a burst of connection with the internet, I reread your 4 recent poems with a lot of pleasure.
      And (surprise, surprise) here’s another gem.

      I love it a lot and the artwork as well. Veggie proof! There’s a lot possible without suffering from animals.
      People are animals too?
      Hmmmm…..

      Warmest greetings, as always, Gus

      • Chère Gus,

        Your words make me smile – you know how to slip inside a poem and stroke it from the inside. I love that you felt the artwork too, a proof that desire can be lush, indulgent… without harm. (or can it?)

        And yes… people are animals too. The difference is, we pretend we’re tame – until someone bares their teeth, or leaves scratches down your back. haha (but if I bite you know I am excited and you are doing something so right) Perhaps that’s the secret pulse you caught in the poem: pleasure, hunger, and the little cruelty of always wanting more. 😉

    • Feels like old times seeing you again Kx

      Boy, have I missed your writing and you. Feels like eons…

      Well you didn’t disappoint, my hunger is rising and your picture, well you always know how to stir the pot, maybe you’ll let me lick it clean !

      BIG LIKE

      RL AWARD if they had RL’s

      • Mmm… so it really has been far too long, hasn’t it? I’ve missed the way you let that hunger spill right through your words. Stirring the pot is half the fun… I love stirring the pot if it means I am going to get spanked hard and … * nevermind, innocent look * and teasing you with a little taste, letting you wonder just how messy I’ll let that pot get before you lick it clean. 😈🔥 Thanks for the BIG LIKE, and that RL award? I’ll take it… naked.

    • That is cooking. Oven is hot over here.

      • Careful… it’s always hot over here, and I might sneak in and let you push me back against the oven door. Feel me shiver as the heat seeps into my skin, while your lips trace fire over me. I’d melt for you, drip for you, beg for you… and then I’d make you burn just as wildly, until we’re both too undone to tell where the heat ends and we begin. Okay I get carried away easily… I swear my mind is permanently in the gutter…

    • It’s always a pleasure and experience to read you.

      • I knew you are the sentimental type Adagio even if you hide it… but still you surprised me. And I have to admit, hearing that feels nice. I like knowing my words aren’t just read, but felt – that they leave you with an experience. Careful though… if you keep saying things like that, I might start expecting more sweet confessions from you.

    • Passionately penned, Kristina. This was piping hot straight from the oven. A sweet and gooey concoction indeed. Deliciously written my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Mmm… piping hot, gooey, and tempting – you make me blush the way you describe tasting my words, Damian. Maybe I should keep baking them up just to see how hungry I can make you. Your appetite is always appreciated. 🔥😉 sweet and gooey is only the surface. Beneath the sugar there’s intense heat, bite, and something far more decadent. I love that you tasted the fire in this one.

    • Loved the sexiness of this piece.

      • Thank you… guess I just can’t help but let some sexiness slip into everything I write. Maybe it’s my guilty pleasure… or maybe I just like keeping you stirred up. I love that you stopped by to see me, that’s very sweet. 😉🔥

    • How did I miss this Krispie slice of sensual fruit pie? You remain an orchard of midnight promise. Glad you are still quill’ing an’ all.

      • Mmm, you always had a way with words – orchard of midnight promise might be my new favorite sin. I’ve been keeping the quill warm and other things hot, just waiting for someone to come steal a taste again. Careful though… this fruit still bites back. 🍒🖤

    • A delicious write! As always.
      I would love some honey in milk
      Or milk in the honey. “)

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    Create The Picture

    Styles clash often in writing Collaborations take chemistry  Ego’s can lead to infighting Often shrouded within mystery   When successful it’s grand  Playing to each others strengths Turning glass back into sand Always going to great lengths   Bad vibes will lead to disaster Resorting in Kamikaze antics  Mind starts spinning...

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    • This is a brilliant and honest look at the collaborative process. You perfectly capture the tension and the beauty of it. The line “Turning glass back into sand” is an amazing image for the way things come together.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Collaborations are a dance in a way. Got to read your partner. It’s tricky to get magic but when it works it’s beautiful.

      Great ink friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is a dance, that can be magical indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I remember you from the ember DU days (daze?) but our paths never crossed. You were always so encouraging and supportive of fellow comrades. That is an art in itself. Keep writing fella.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ghosteen. So glad our paths finally crossed then, nice meeting you my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Great and beautifully written reflections, dear Damian! I agree, the collaboration process is an art itself. Different writing styles collide, and if they are harmonic, the result will read like penned with one ink. When the styles are very different, maybe a piece of abstract art will be created. The diversity of possible collaborations makes them beautiful and interesting!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you totally, it is like a dance of sorts. But it is a magical process. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Even Lennon and McCartney couldn’t get along in the end. Collaborations are famous throughout history. But sometimes ideas go in different directions, ego’s overtake, and animosity takes over. It can be sad, very sad when things fall apart.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That is true, a lot of duo’s grow apart. People can grow apart over time. Addiction, sobriety, faith, and starting families all have an effect on the collective relationship. It can be sad, indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Friends drift apart. As you mentioned in your last comment. Also we just change. Many things we don’t enjoy or like from when we were kids or teenagers. Keeping a friend or two from your youth though is important. I feel it’s the bridge to a life that was a simpler, more meaningful time. We grow old, but the kid inside never dies. Great write Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true, time itself changes people. I’m connected with my inner child. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I always find collaborating incredibly intimidating. How to find a balance where both voices carry equal weight? Some styles are more dominating & others more gentle. But I’ve seen jarringly different styles woven beautifully in a single piece. I love the glass back to sand metaphor. Deconstructing to its base element. All comes from the same beach, as it were. The places your pen travels, my friend…

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. My favorite line! It’s a dance for sure, sometimes teetering on the brink of disaster, only to be saved at the last possible moment of the grand finale. At least that’s my experience with the whole process. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I have been asked many times but even though I am occasionally tempted, I have always tended to shy away .. having said that, I have a great deal of admiration for anyone who chooses to go down that particular poetic and or storytelling route & gets something out of it other than enjoyment or a headache .. I imagine that here you have given this particular reader something to think about long after the curtain has been drawn .. Kindest regards to both you n your pen Damian .. Neville

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve collaborated in songwriting, not as much on poetry, though I’ve done a few. It’s a dance basically, and chemistry plays a big part. But it’s a cool experience, never say never my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    The Great Deceiver

    Fueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation  As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment  Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose   Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see   Face...

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      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This is really good. Damian <3

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Powerful work. Superb.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.

      The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍

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    (Motherfucka Season) Evil Snowman XIII

                 “A foul mouth bitch is worse than a car wreckThat’s why a fist or a dick sometimes need to put them in check,            “Disrespect in any form a motherfucka can never let rideSo like an icy street that...

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    Novocain

    Your eyes mesmerize meFollowing my every moveStill wonder what you seeHoping that you approveYour lips blazing like fireFeeling them on my skinHow you take me higherWanting it to never end Every time you're nearPushing me to the brinkMy mind is...

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    • Nice one, Damian. A beautiful women can put a man under a spell that makes him forget any pain.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Very true, totally agree. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Those are amazing lyrics. Love it;))

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Still working on the music, especially the vocals. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • hello dearest Damian this is a very great song I can feel your pain❤

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Second stanza, first line, did you mean “you’re”?

      The repetition really works. And the shield me stanza is so clever and just rolls off the tongue.
      Good, good piece of writing.
      j.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jacob. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Yes, I did mean “you’re” nice catch. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Awesome! The rhymes and lyrics are infectious. Like an abscess in a tooth! Nice work dude!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It’s got music as well, though I’m still working on the music. I’ll let you check it out when it’s completed, nice to see you my brother. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • The interesting thing about this one is that, depending on how it’s read, it could be a woman or an addiction. Very clever use of words here, my friend!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Nice catch, you’re on the right path. It has a lot of meanings to me as well. This is the song I’m currently putting music to. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Can heat it already. Great work. Good luck on the solo album.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thank you, I need all the luck I can get. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Some people shy away from a poem that’s composed of rhyme. I’ve always felt that there’s a finesse to it that has to be refined like a piece of art. You have that quality. It speaks volumes, Damian!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. What a lovely comment, so kind of you. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • The lyrics are so lovely, I feel the intensity of the emotions…the push and pull, the thrill and the ache. and the repeated chorus of “sweet novocain” lingers like a haunting, addictive melody. I’d love to hear you sing this. It’s beautiful

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well vocally I’m doing my best, I’m not the greatest singer. lol. I’ll share the song when it’s complete. Thanks so much for your support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like that it has multiple meanings, I always dig those kind of writes. Bon Jovi style, that’s a unique way of putting it, but
      I like it. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I sense there is more to this than presently meets the eye .. Good luck with production .. I suspect it will do well ..
      Neville 😎👍

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I will admit there are multiple meanings to this one. That’s the beauty of words, In my opinion. I need all the luck I can find, thanks for offering some. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • My absolute pleasure ..

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