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    Devil’s Advocate

    Lachlan I stand there in disbelief, watching Carmyn’s ass and the way her hips sway as she walks away from me after she told me to fuck off. I shake my head and laugh a little. No one’s ever told...

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    • Brilliantly penned, P.G. Love the swap of perspective at the beginning, really solid writing my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Yeah I figured a good swap would really tie this one together. Glad it delivered, appreciate you my friend.

        xx
        ~P.G💋

    • I’m just trying to get better. Hehe, thank you for reading and your kind comment dear.
      xx
      ~P.G💋

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    Bound To Bleed

    Dark mass moves across the room Anticipation building in shallow breath Locked inside a fragile mortal tomb Waiting for the chilled whisper of death   Can’t escape from borrowed time This jealous clock still counting down   Critical thinking considered a crime Bloated jester claims his phony...

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    • ” History is repeated on the norm

      Empires tumble in self-inflicted greed ”

      Indeed!
      This society has entered another dieback stage
      Superb write, Damian

      Naaj

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Loved those lines as well. That it has, brother. Much respect, your commentary means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • There are 89 seconds to midnight on the doomsday clock. That’s the closest we’ve ever been to human extinction.
      Great musing, my friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s pretty damn close, 1 minute and 29 seconds, did not know that one. This old dog still learning new tricks, thanks for the info, I like knowing little odd details, I’ve heard of the doomsday clock, just never knew about how close we got. Your commentary really means a lot my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I was reading this & groaning out loud as I did. Because it’s so painfully accurate. Am I the only one who feels like we’re watching the world draw inward…preparing to implode? All because those who have would rather have more than be decent fuckers. So instead they destroy everything in their greed. I’m a subdued pissed now, reading this. Yet again, you capture the essence of reality in all its ugly truth, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree, to quote Dennis Hopper in the movie Flashback: “We got two classes. The truly needy and the truly greedy.” I sometimes can’t believe it’s happened, then I have to recall how we got here. I’m surprised how slowly the people are waking up, gotta hope they don’t wait till the 11th hour. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Politicians need to be obliterated! End of story. Excellent!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Kiss My Ass, Mr. Green Eyes

    Carmyn Okay, so maybe I was wrong. Finding a job the old fashioned way is harder than I thought. I’ve been making calls and showing up to the places I’ve applied to and am always hit with the same reply,...

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    • Phenomenal writing, P.G. Tremendous storytelling once again my friend. Great chapter. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    The Angry Box

    I was a shy awkward kid, from about 4th grade to high school. I was never popular, to some I probably wasn’t recognized at all. Except, to be picked on by bullies who take pleasure in that sort of...

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    • I like the angry box. You are right it is important to let out the rage, bottled up is a bomb ready to be set off. Good write Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. It is very important indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Powerful. Writing is cethartic. You nailed it.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I figured you could relate. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Despite wildly different backgrounds & life stories, I somehow think you & I have similar spirits. Creation is a beautiful outlet & when we’re in pain, all we want to do is create beauty to soothe the wounds. And if you were anything like I was, secretly hoping one day you’d be famous & show those douche canoes. 😂 You, my friend, are a rockstar!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I have thought that as well, we’re what I call Kindred Spirts. Fancy talk for we kinda think alike, I feel that too. I’m the most popular rockstar that never made it I know of. lol. I’ve made it in my own way, just not the traditional way. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Relax the mind

    My mind escapes my thoughtsThe waves crashAs I burnThe ocean coolsSerenity is what I yearnThe tide comes inAs I go outThe air filled with hopeI scream, no one hears me shoutA pleasant day here on the shoreI'm steeped in...

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