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Read MoreShould I pinch my now small flame and die? Is death really the only way? Should I extinguish what I have left? Why do memories flow from my flame and dry to a still, only to linger on? Is my flame being blown out by...
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Read MoreBohemain Womanbohemian woman wild spiriteddaydreaming blues shade her personalityhippie chick her rock n roll styleseductive culinary as she marries flavorsgentle as a flower but powerfulher love of her man fiercenothing stands in the way of itthe wind and air...
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You wouldn’t be knowing anyone like that would you? Enjoyed this my friend, always clever with your words 🌼
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hello dearest Joe smiles I do know this kind of lady she shines ❤️
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I believe she does 🌼
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wrote this poem about me shes a wonderful, beautiful,and talented one of a kind woman
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hello beautiful Lora good morning thank you for just being you and being there for me 💕
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“a lovely hellion of sorts don’t mess with her” love that line.
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thank you graciously lovely Fia I can sense power in you too ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian she is one of the people helping me through this time just lovely ❤️
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Outstanding. Your words captivate Brenda. Marvelous!!
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously she is a captivating woman ❤️
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Read MoreThen Meg paused as she gazed into Daniel's blue eyes pleading, "I hope you have something to soothe the pain, baby." Then she playfully nugded her nose against his, then leaned in for a kiss but playfully...
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That’s a lot of action for a parking lot, babe!
I have to tell you that I LOVE sweaty sex. One of my favorite memories is losing power during a thunderstorm and getting fucked in the bedroom with the window up… rain pouring in on the carpet, but we just didn’t care. It was hot and humid as shit. No air conditioning. No fans. Soaking the bed in perspiration. Glistening. Banging like animals.And your finger has been up my ass for a while. Maybe you better suck it clean.
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Oh that’s hott. Wait till tomorrow for part four, more action in the parking lot under the lightning storm hehe. And you gave me an idea in your comment about my next short story.
Maybe I should have tasted more of yoy on my finger! Surprise coming!
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Read MoreSome say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...
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Superb
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
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Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
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You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
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Thank you, Wil;))l
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Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Heavy! Like this a lot.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. An incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian