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Read MoreYoung still I am. Though old I feel. The youthful blushes once there, now forever gone. The fresh feeling of being young, replaced with the depression of aging. How can I get it back? Not my youth I mean, but the feeling of it. That sense of having...
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Middle age is peculiar. You are neither young nor old and yet both. It is a window through which you can see — what was, what is, and will be. How will you choose to look through the glass?
I am in the same position, my friend. Excellent piece!
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Read MoreForever young we are! Feels we are this way always when eye to eye, lips on lips. Forever in love we will be! Be forever this way and forever our hearts melting. I love you, heart you, hugging you so we can feel each other's heartbeat. Romantic...
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Phenomenal write, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This feels like young/new love. Nicely done Daniel. xoxo
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You write beautifully.
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Thank you, Alexandria. I write romance, horror and erotica. I strive at making whatever I write memorable.
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I’ve been reading your work. It is memorable.
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For our lives to be whole and in balance we must accept both light and darkness. Rarely an easy task. Very insightful piece!
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Thanks for the read.
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Without darkness, how will we recognize the light? I love this piece, Peter
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To me, darkness in this sense means trials and tribulations. If we never went through the darkness, we wouldn’t grow. I’ve embraced my dark times. I’m glad you wrote this, Peter.
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You take your grief and spill it into a poem of great remembrance and timeless ache for this soul who apparently left this earth all too soon. Lyrically beautiful and soulful vision of what he meant to you and how you heal from loss. Love this poem.
John
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hello dearest John thank you he was a part my heart and he was so young to go he will be missed 💕
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Your poetry captures so much in just a few stanza’s. Your words are beautiful and heartbreaking. Nice tribute to your son Brenda. xoxo
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hello dearest Keith thank you for the love here it’s felt 💕
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What a beautifully expressed tribute, Brenda
Much respect
Naaj
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hello dearest Naajir you would have liked him I believe he was a lot of fun thank you for the love 💕
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I feel this one in my bones…As a mom, I know dam well that no amount of writing can take away the pain…Having that said, this is beautifully written and it gives hope that while appart, you are still connected…
Jade xox-
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hello beautiful Jade thank you for the love here no writing is a help but I fear the emotions that keep rising 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely tribute my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for the love 💕 it’s appreciated…
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Write it out, Brenda. You honor him with your love. Write it out ❤️
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hello beautiful Willow thank you for the love I feel like he doesn’t want me to be sad and I want to write and I did today but I know no matter what write the sadness is going to come forth I deeply appreciate you 💕
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We all are connected to those who leave us in death.
I still feel my father on my shoulder when I need guidance and my mom was right about everything. Both gone, but live in my heart.Your son will always be with you.
He had a beautiful smile.Condolences and remembrances Brenda
I feel you
🖤💙💓🤠
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hello dearest Poet good morning I think so too that we are connected I can hear him talking to me and I feel him close he is on to a new life but doesn’t want me to be sad thank you for the love here 💕
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Read MoreYou know, back in the day I love me some young men I was willowy, I was spring, Damn I was May I was down to trying every position conceivable Hormones were rampant The body and spirit were ready, willing, and able As work starts...
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Love the sheer erotic narrative here that draws me in and makes me want to stay until the very end. Truly a hot poem that inspired bedroom thoughts and feelings. I could feel this deep down where the sun doesn’t shine.
John
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Thank you, John. As long as you feel it deep down, then I did it right. lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. You always make the temperature hotter with your writes my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I try to raise the heat when I can. ;))
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” They start with that whisper that hits behind the ear
A practiced tone
That causes goose bumps and raises those baby hairs ”
Yeahhh…this paints a pic of some nice memories.
Nicely written
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj😊
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I’ve always been accused of being a grown man… now you know why… this was a great story.. perfectly done…love it.
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Thank you, Sam., You do the whisper thing? Nice;))
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian