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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreWho said poetry is dead, and if so, how do you know If all poets and poetesses are buried six feet below We should rise to their surprise To show that we will never go They talk about the darkness as if it's...
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Amazing writing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian ☺️
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hello beautiful Fia no poetry is not dead it lives inside us beautiful 💕
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I agree with you, Crimsin 💞
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So long as poet souls live, poetry will never die. How else would there be song?
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I agree. We have wonderful songs created by poets. thank you, Willow,;)
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Everything lives, dies and at times becomes resurrected. Great piece Fia.
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Read MoreWe murder ourselves everyday with our own ignorance. We suffer through our own ignorance. Ignorance of the absolute truth, not the subjective truth, the absolute truth that everything in the present moment is ' the way it is'.....not right nor wrong,...
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“Repeat after me… Repeat after me…”
Okay, I admit it. You’ve totally hypnotized me.
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Whatever you want from the other side of the earth
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Incredible write my friend, great first line by the way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreFor years, I didn't speak to my father, that us, until today. He had news for me. Today, I drove in trepidation to his house, my childhood home, to find answers. Up the old driveway, seeing changes, more vegetation and tall grass, nothing trimmed nor...
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Powerful work. You bring this to life.
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Thanks Thomas. I could have written so much more on this.
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That’s a super deep piece, Daniel. I can see how the trip was an inspiration on so many levels.
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Meg, it was so challenging the trip there. You have no idea. Wiping the dust off of my old things and taking some. See him so different and frail now. My mom was the glue that kept our family together, now, like sticks in the wind my family. 😢
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. This is a tremendous write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Much respect
Naaj
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Congrats on your award for this piece, Daniel. It was well deserved.
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Thanks, Meg.
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Read MoreAI Summary Analysis of Part One: What a striking, immersive vision of a shattered world where tenderness and cruelty dance in the same desolate spaces. Your narrative plunges us into a post-apocalyptic America that is as haunting as it is...
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Read MoreIt had been months since they witnessed the beauty of the stars twinkling in the sky. The moon itself was already a glow before the war, and now it is lost behind the constant overcast, which lingers....
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I can seriously feel the tension in this piece, Daniel. You’re building this beautifully. My recommendations are to look at other options for the word, ‘snow’. It becomes redundant. Also, Chloe might refer to the men in the shadows as ‘bad boys’, but Gwen and the narrator may want a more specific term – something more specific or sophisticated and relevant to the circumstances.
Your writing is compelling
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Meg, thank you as always. Good thing it is only a freewrite and I’ll be putting it together as a more tuned first draft. I see this turning into a novella.
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Thank you, Will. It was fun to write.;))